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Array ( [sid] => 14144 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Seraph [time] => 2003-03-12 09:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => How many times have I counted my problems
Smoked my cigarettes, wished for an end to this life
How many people have looked at me with disgust
How many of them have I broke their trust
I've been mocked by many and put down by more
The harshness of the words eventually eat away my core
I remember a time when I was popular and great
But little did I know that popularity made me what I hate
I thought I could stare into the pit and laugh
When I tripped into the hole and for so long it's been my path
I tried to grab the walls to slow my descent
I could only cry out for an angel to be sent
After awhile my voice gave out and my sanity spent
It seems so absurd now that I look back
All I had to do was be positive to find my angel and get back on track
With time there came a silvery ball of light
Its beams of brightness pierced the black of night
The angel came close to me so I could see its face
It was you, that lovely being it was
You joined with me, making whole what once was half
Even now I look at you and you are still that angelic seraph [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => TundraHydra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Seraph

Contributed by TundraHydra on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



How many times have I counted my problems
Smoked my cigarettes, wished for an end to this life
How many people have looked at me with disgust
How many of them have I broke their trust
I've been mocked by many and put down by more
The harshness of the words eventually eat away my core
I remember a time when I was popular and great
But little did I know that popularity made me what I hate
I thought I could stare into the pit and laugh
When I tripped into the hole and for so long it's been my path
I tried to grab the walls to slow my descent
I could only cry out for an angel to be sent
After awhile my voice gave out and my sanity spent
It seems so absurd now that I look back
All I had to do was be positive to find my angel and get back on track
With time there came a silvery ball of light
Its beams of brightness pierced the black of night
The angel came close to me so I could see its face
It was you, that lovely being it was
You joined with me, making whole what once was half
Even now I look at you and you are still that angelic seraph




Copyright © TundraHydra ... [ 2003-03-12 09:30:00]
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Re: My Seraph (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 09:52:21 AM AEST
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Very well done on this peice I love all angels!
I really liked this write! Christina


Re: My Seraph (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:29:49 AM AEST
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GOOD JOB INDEED ..
GINA


Re: My Seraph (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:42:09 AM AEST
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I liked this can relate to it a lot except for the last part good imagery a lot of feeling in this.

Bobo (Joel)




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