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I Hate...

Contributed by Bubbles02 on Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 02:12:37 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



...the way you told me all those lies.
...the way you looked at me with your beautiful eyes.
...what you've turned me into.
...that all this is true.
...the way you think I'm okay.
...that it doesn't matter what I say.
...that this ended.
...how my heart hasn't mended.
...that I don't think it ever will.
...how you tossed me away after you had your fill.
...you.
But most of all, I hate that this isn't true.
Unbelieveably, I still love you




Copyright © Bubbles02 ... [ 2008-04-05 02:12:37]
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Re: I Hate... (User Rating: 1 )
by althea_kendry on Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 02:33:33 AM AEST
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wow .. great job bubbles you are an amazing writer :D


Re: I Hate... (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 08:06:59 AM AEST
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Emotions can be strange things sometimes, love and hate at the same time.......but we can't help the way we feel
Nice work

Steve


Re: I Hate... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 10:20:09 AM AEST
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wow. Your last line says it all, doesn't it? The heart is a hopeless
case, I'm afraid. Once in love, it cannot be convinced otherwise
and once out ... it has little hope for the breath of tomorrow.

It's all so dramatic, but beautiful at once. Your piece captured the
intensity it is to love, not want to, but love just the same.

Great job.

~Breezy



Re: I Hate... (User Rating: 1 )
by whome on Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 11:41:56 AM AEST
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The pain come through so clearly. If it wasn't for the pain I would say you have written beautifully. I hope you heal and learn to love again.




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