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Array ( [sid] => 141374 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When... [time] => 2008-04-04 23:55:11 [hometext] => well idk...it was how i was feeling kinda a story outline....comments? [bodytext] => When every word looses its meaning,
When every heart stops its beating,
When every mind doesnt know what to think,
When evryone lets go,
And lets their heart sink,
When every pice shatters as it hits the floor,
When every wisper is sllenced as you open the door,
When every person looks to the ground,
When every person tremles at your sound,
When every tear is wiped away,
When everyone hears that you decided to stay,
When every touch makes her cry,
When everyone realizes he was the reason she had to die,
When every broken promise is adressed,
When everyone sees him walk away while shes at rest,
When everyone hears the thumping through the heat,
When everyone knows hes the only reason her heart still beats...

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BRIDGI [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

When...

Contributed by BRIDGI on Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:55:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When every word looses its meaning,
When every heart stops its beating,
When every mind doesnt know what to think,
When evryone lets go,
And lets their heart sink,
When every pice shatters as it hits the floor,
When every wisper is sllenced as you open the door,
When every person looks to the ground,
When every person tremles at your sound,
When every tear is wiped away,
When everyone hears that you decided to stay,
When every touch makes her cry,
When everyone realizes he was the reason she had to die,
When every broken promise is adressed,
When everyone sees him walk away while shes at rest,
When everyone hears the thumping through the heat,
When everyone knows hes the only reason her heart still beats...

Copyright © BRIDGI ... [ 2008-04-04 23:55:11]
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Re: When... (User Rating: 1 )
by whome on Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 01:07:40 AM AEST
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I think you should check your spelling.
A little repetitive but I liked the basic idea.
Don't stop writting, whatever you do.

Re: When... (User Rating: 1 )
by alibof10 on Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 10:49:20 AM AEST
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awesome poem! i know the feeling ..

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