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Array ( [sid] => 141322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm here. [time] => 2008-04-02 11:51:45 [hometext] => My bestfriend is having a rough time. I cant imagine losing him; he means the world to me. Im not quite sure what to do; i'm tryiing to help, but it never seems like enough =/ [bodytext] =>





I can feel the pain that is agonizing you, ripping everything apart like shreads.
Every tear you shead and every frown you make,
just breaks me apart inside.
You don't realize it, you dont realize the love i share for you,
the weaknesses ive overcome since youve been part of my life.
You're a strong person, one of the strongest ive ever met;
you have held on when it seems impossible.
Why cant you see it though?
Why cant you see how much you mean?
You've saved someone who was impossible to recover;whether you'll ever reckon that is another story.
You're the only real person ive ever met.
I'm shaking at the thought of your uncertainty of pushing through this.
Without you, whats the world?
Pointless, insignificant,useless..
Iwish i could just hold you in my arms and tell you "itll be okay"
but, the simplicity in that will never occur.
I wish i could just embrace all you're feelings and take away all the wrongs.
Bud, you mean more to me than i could ever explain,
without you in this world, everything isnt fit,
life isnt how its supposed to be; imagining you not bound within it,makes my heart shatter.
Without you the world would be a dark abyss,shameful and dull.
Please dont end this, please dont give in,
you're stronger than this.
I will always be here, and i will always love you, don't ever think different not even for a fast second. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 65 [informant] => poetrygirl1991 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
I'm here.

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 11:51:45 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff









I can feel the pain that is agonizing you, ripping everything apart like shreads.
Every tear you shead and every frown you make,
just breaks me apart inside.
You don't realize it, you dont realize the love i share for you,
the weaknesses ive overcome since youve been part of my life.
You're a strong person, one of the strongest ive ever met;
you have held on when it seems impossible.
Why cant you see it though?
Why cant you see how much you mean?
You've saved someone who was impossible to recover;whether you'll ever reckon that is another story.
You're the only real person ive ever met.
I'm shaking at the thought of your uncertainty of pushing through this.
Without you, whats the world?
Pointless, insignificant,useless..
Iwish i could just hold you in my arms and tell you "itll be okay"
but, the simplicity in that will never occur.
I wish i could just embrace all you're feelings and take away all the wrongs.
Bud, you mean more to me than i could ever explain,
without you in this world, everything isnt fit,
life isnt how its supposed to be; imagining you not bound within it,makes my heart shatter.
Without you the world would be a dark abyss,shameful and dull.
Please dont end this, please dont give in,
you're stronger than this.
I will always be here, and i will always love you, don't ever think different not even for a fast second.




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Re: I'm here. (User Rating: 1 )
by AnenaLynne on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 12:37:06 PM AEST
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wow, really really heartfelt and sweet. i can sense how much you care for this person and i sincerely hope that he expreiences brighter days ahead. the best part about rock bottom is that theres no where to go but up. believe me, ive been there. really hope that you and your friend work everything out
~nena


Re: I'm here. (User Rating: 1 )
by oreo_kisses on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 05:54:25 PM AEST
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wow this is really awesome and you can feel your emotions as you read it I really like this piece


Re: I'm here. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 02:36:47 AM AEST
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wow this is really powerful. did you show this poem to your friend? I think you should because it may show him someone cares about him.. and that is probably what he needs.. beautiful job here. rock on,

vampyress Jenni




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