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she casts herself across my night,
and burns me with her passionate self
to shake the trinkets off the shelf.

like a mother, she takes me to her breast
where I find sustenance and rest;
some healing of my awful past
and happiness that’s meant to last.

too many times I’ve called her bluff
when she tells me she’s had enough,
and left her broken at my feet
to watch me as I find the street.

she harangues me in long tirades
and eclipses me in various shades;
cries and laughs and often broods
but I love her, and her many moods.
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Her Many Moods

Contributed by spike on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 11:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

like a phoenix in furious flight
she casts herself across my night,
and burns me with her passionate self
to shake the trinkets off the shelf.

like a mother, she takes me to her breast
where I find sustenance and rest;
some healing of my awful past
and happiness that’s meant to last.

too many times I’ve called her bluff
when she tells me she’s had enough,
and left her broken at my feet
to watch me as I find the street.

she harangues me in long tirades
and eclipses me in various shades;
cries and laughs and often broods
but I love her, and her many moods.

Copyright Â© spike ... [ 2008-04-01 23:56:18]
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Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 03:09:48 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful~~God Bless~~

Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 03:35:01 AM AEST
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A touching piece that expresses a wonderful unconditional love.

Peace to you my friend

~Shannon

Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 05:26:43 AM AEST
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Wonderful.... this reminds me of my husband and what he would say about my many moods....Thanks for sharing...
Jenni_K

Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 09:35:40 PM AEST
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As long as you love her, and she loves you, no mountain is too high. Nice write.

Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 01:07:47 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written as you must be aware. On behalf of moody women everywhere, thank you for understanding and accepting her.

Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 01:51:52 AM AEST
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absolutely beautifully written, a joy to read...

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:30:33 PM AEST
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Are you seriously kidding me? So the big tough guy, has a soft heart. Damn, spikerino, this one is
too beautiful. You astound me sometimes, my friend. Must be those bedfellows you've be harbouring!
*winks*

The opening of this just staggered me. Damn. That first line is to DIE for. I mean, literally!! And
then the stanza and the following one .... oh my! OH, to be the damsel this poem is written about.
What secrets lie waiting for the heart to unlock! I'm such a sucker, (as you know) for a good romantic
dishing and just a tinge of swooning. But lets not my heart get carried away ... lol

Your ending couldn't be more after a heart made of hopeless romance. What a find on such a dismal
night for me! Thank you for this. It was like opening a book of Keats. Truly ~

~Breezy

Re: Her Many Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 08:38:04 PM AEST
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Nice writing Spike. If it's love from both sides, it always wins. Beautiful write.

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