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Float back to the ground
Go up
Fall down down down
So manipulative
Follow any power
That is stonger than you
No need to think
They will tell you what to do
So manipulative
It will take you where you need to be
It will not be where you want to be
But where you look picture perfect
Fly away
Float back to the ground
Go up
Fall down down down
So manipulative
It lifts you up
Pulls you tugs you here and there
Do not complain
No one will listen no one will care
So manipulative
It will take you where you need to be
It will not be where you want to be
But where you look picture perfect
Fly away
Float back to the ground
Go up
Fall down down down
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Manipulative

Contributed by eeeitak on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 10:36:55 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Fly away
Float back to the ground
Go up
Fall down down down
So manipulative
Follow any power
That is stonger than you
No need to think
They will tell you what to do
So manipulative
It will take you where you need to be
It will not be where you want to be
But where you look picture perfect
Fly away
Float back to the ground
Go up
Fall down down down
So manipulative
It lifts you up
Pulls you tugs you here and there
Do not complain
No one will listen no one will care
So manipulative
It will take you where you need to be
It will not be where you want to be
But where you look picture perfect
Fly away
Float back to the ground
Go up
Fall down down down

Copyright © eeeitak ... [ 2008-04-01 10:36:55]
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Re: Manipulative (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 11:28:07 AM AEST
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This is great. I am sitting here looking out my window at a tree that has not yet a bud on it, but see the leaves dancing to your write.

Deadwriter

Re: Manipulative (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 11:40:27 AM AEST
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Nice write~~God Bless

Re: Manipulative (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 11:48:57 AM AEST
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An interesting write... I never thought of leaves in that light.... Thank you.... Jenni_K

Re: Manipulative (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 12:23:37 PM AEST
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Very interesting write.. Could be about more then leaves. But I will leave it at leaves. Nice way of put words to actions.

MaJ

Re: Manipulative (User Rating: 1 )
by calebcrain on Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 03:35:01 AM AEST
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i loved this
i like how the repetition of this part

Fly away
Float back to the ground
Go up
Fall down down down
So manipulative

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