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Array ( [sid] => 141283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For Me These Days [time] => 2008-03-31 14:06:18 [hometext] => This started as a poem with structure and just ended up as more of a thought process... [bodytext] => Sifting through the
Subconscious mind
Looking for the right word
At the right time

No way to describe
What your feeling
Hardships all around
But your dealing

And thats life
Thats life for you

Whatever happened
To being care free
When I was young
Nothing troubled me

Now standing up
In front of a crowd
I better be funny
I better be loud

And if I am not
Please forgive me
I apologize
In advance

And I guess thats life
For me these days
So much for to be happy
But I want that one
That one smile
Those two eyes
That can look into mine
And tell me its alright
And I know its alright
But I guess thats life
For me
These days [comments] => 3 [counter] => 272 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Ari [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

For Me These Days

Contributed by Ari on Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 02:06:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Sifting through the
Subconscious mind
Looking for the right word
At the right time

No way to describe
What your feeling
Hardships all around
But your dealing

And thats life
Thats life for you

Whatever happened
To being care free
When I was young
Nothing troubled me

Now standing up
In front of a crowd
I better be funny
I better be loud

And if I am not
Please forgive me
I apologize
In advance

And I guess thats life
For me these days
So much for to be happy
But I want that one
That one smile
Those two eyes
That can look into mine
And tell me its alright
And I know its alright
But I guess thats life
For me
These days

Copyright © Ari ... [ 2008-03-31 14:06:18]
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Re: For Me These Days (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 03:45:40 PM AEST
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Well it turned out right no matter. I can certainly relate to this awesome write.
Well done.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: For Me These Days (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 04:46:00 PM AEST
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well done

always, abraham

Re: For Me These Days (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 04:53:20 PM AEST
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structure blows, but ur rhymes weren't forced and sounded good.

why not still be care free? it's more than possible

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