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He was a perfect being.
But why didn't He make this a perfect place.
He has set us up to be a disgrace.

He could have made it to where man wouldn't have been a problem
But He didn't and I want to know why
He didn't think of this even though he was perfect and now we can hardly get by

This world is corrupt.
he has set us up to fail.
At some pint in out life we all deserve to go to hell.

Creator of all
Perfect unlike the rest
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He have made this a perfect place

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 11:00:03 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I know a lot of people disagree with what this is saying but most of you don't sit and think about these thing but i have so if you don't agree I'm sorry but this is what I think

He was a perfect being.
But why didn't He make this a perfect place.
He has set us up to be a disgrace.

He could have made it to where man wouldn't have been a problem
But He didn't and I want to know why
He didn't think of this even though he was perfect and now we can hardly get by

This world is corrupt.
he has set us up to fail.
At some pint in out life we all deserve to go to hell.

Creator of all
Perfect unlike the rest
But He has set us up to fall

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2008-03-28 11:00:03]
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Re: He have made this a perfect place (User Rating: 1 )
by Aysha on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 01:48:01 PM AEST
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I like this poem very much! Im glad you wrote it.
I often think about the same thing

Thank You

Aysha

Re: He have made this a perfect place (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 02:54:22 PM AEST
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Can a perfect being create another perfect being?

Perhaps it is merely a choice.

Tell me, what man has created something equal to himself?

Exactly ^_^

Thought Provoking.

Have a good night.

Always, abraham

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