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Array ( [sid] => 141203 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You came in to my dark world and gave me a light [time] => 2008-03-27 06:15:41 [hometext] => This a a poem for my cat Fefekiki who died feb-18-06, I thinks its still a work in prog, so tell me what you think thanks. [bodytext] => You came in to my dark world and gave me a light
laying on my chest at night, I felt at peace with life
you were always there when I did not want to be alone
you gave me hope, when I thought all was lost
With you I felt complete, all broken shards mended together
You made me feel loved and worth something
then as quickly you came you had slowly fallen apart
that damn feline leukemia was the end of your well needed start
I wish I could have saved you but you worsened everyday
I still need you I wish we didn’t have to part you are what I lived for you gave me feeling in my heart
but the disease just kept spreading and they put you to sleep and all that was left was your collar to keep
Ill never forget you I still cry to this day I just wish so much you could have stayed
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You came in to my dark world and gave me a light

Contributed by blackrose233 on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 06:15:41 AM in AEST
Topic: PetPoems



You came in to my dark world and gave me a light
laying on my chest at night, I felt at peace with life
you were always there when I did not want to be alone
you gave me hope, when I thought all was lost
With you I felt complete, all broken shards mended together
You made me feel loved and worth something
then as quickly you came you had slowly fallen apart
that damn feline leukemia was the end of your well needed start
I wish I could have saved you but you worsened everyday
I still need you I wish we didn’t have to part you are what I lived for you gave me feeling in my heart
but the disease just kept spreading and they put you to sleep and all that was left was your collar to keep
Ill never forget you I still cry to this day I just wish so much you could have stayed




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Re: You came in to my dark world and gave me a light (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 01:04:27 PM AEST
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aww this is a very well expressed love for a pet. I also have a pet and have had many pets.. your pet will remain with you in spirit. Im sorry to hear you lost it.. I know how hard it is to lose a loving pet.. My dog is 18 I had her since i was 10 and i will be sad when she goes.. i really enjoyed this write though.

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: You came in to my dark world and gave me a light (User Rating: 1 )
by Aysha on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 02:24:29 PM AEST
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isnt it odd how humans can have so much affection for annimals? I have a 16 year old dalmation, shes been my best friend I will be very sad to see her go

Aysha


Re: You came in to my dark world and gave me a light (User Rating: 1 )
by mecatpurrson on Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 10:06:14 PM AEST
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Nice read about a sad tale. Sorry for your loss. Animals are such a comfort in our lives, aren't they?




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