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her heart forlorn and filled with dread.
Her tears cascading down the rocks.
Soaking her flowing dark curly locks.

A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurt inside
where woman and nature did collide.

The legend held fast to this day.
Another young woman to the cliff did stray.
Her tears too flowed wild and free.
In this secret place wild and free.

A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurts inside
where woman and nature did collide.

Hushed upon the willow wing
across the valleys the birds did sing.
Echo's of the hearts remain
far across yonder plain.

A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurts inside
where woman and nature did collide.

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River wild

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:08:20 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

She walked near the rocky edge,
her heart forlorn and filled with dread.
Her tears cascading down the rocks.
Soaking her flowing dark curly locks.

A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurt inside
where woman and nature did collide.

The legend held fast to this day.
Another young woman to the cliff did stray.
Her tears too flowed wild and free.
In this secret place wild and free.

A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurts inside
where woman and nature did collide.

Hushed upon the willow wing
across the valleys the birds did sing.
Echo's of the hearts remain
far across yonder plain.

A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurts inside
where woman and nature did collide.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-03-26 12:08:20]
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Re: River wild (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:16:28 PM AEST
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Very interesting, well written work of art.
huggs,
emy

Re: River wild (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:30:13 PM AEST
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Shelby,
Thank you for the great poem to read. Quite powerful in a quiet way.

Deadwriter

Re: River wild (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 04:32:48 PM AEST
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Michelle,

I really enjoyed this write. I can see so much of myself in my current journey of life.

Peace to you my friend.

~Shannon

Re: River wild (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 11:36:03 AM AEST
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A mastery way to reflect women's plight,
and Beautifully penned.
Thanks,
With lots of love and respect,
FRANCO.

Re: River wild (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 01:01:34 PM AEST
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this is a very intense write.. it could be taken 2 different ways.. another lovely write from you. you always write things so deep and meaningful though... always a word of wisdom within your writes

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: River wild (User Rating: 1 )
by Disha on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 03:55:36 PM AEST
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Very nice... I think you have a depth in your writing!!

Great work

Re: River wild (User Rating: 1 )
by Harmony on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:58:47 PM AEST
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I like the idea of woman and nature colliding :) thankyou for your comment shelby :)

Take care

Harmony :)

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