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Felt fear crawling into your stomach
and hide in the depths of your being?
Showing its face when you least expect
gripping your body
taking total control
words that you speak
that was never yours
accusations and arguments
without any roots
superseding reality
needs no grounds no foundation
takes over and destroys
no release
suffocation
small gulps of air
no release

fear
you did not know exist
until it shows its ugly face again

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Fear

Contributed by SilverRain on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 08:39:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Have you ever been scared?
Felt fear crawling into your stomach
and hide in the depths of your being?
Showing its face when you least expect
gripping your body
taking total control
words that you speak
that was never yours
accusations and arguments
without any roots
superseding reality
needs no grounds no foundation
takes over and destroys
no release
suffocation
small gulps of air
no release

fear
you did not know exist
until it shows its ugly face again

Copyright © SilverRain ... [ 2008-03-25 20:39:50]
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Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by alibof10 on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 10:58:28 PM AEST
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great explanation of fear and well alligned words ... pice of art :)

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 02:02:29 PM AEST
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The way in which you wrote it made fear dance off the page, very inventive. Oh yes I can relate. Just call me chicken little of late lol!

Great poem

Michelle

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 09:10:57 PM AEST
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Gripping. Awesome!
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 05:50:41 AM AEST
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really deep. very strong emotions. I really liked this write, it was straight to the point, and it had me feeling and imagining the decriptions you set forward.Keep up on writing,i look forward to reading more of your work.
Good Job.

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by GDub on Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 12:15:03 AM AEST
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I love the lines "crawling into my stomach" and "small gulps of air". They make you feel how uncomfortable and restricting fear can be...

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