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Array ( [sid] => 141133 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => second thoughts [time] => 2008-03-22 18:00:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Take a look at yourself
with your judging eyes
with the closed minded views
we've grown to despise
you won't let up
or give any tries
to anything new to you
and so you ask why-
Why are you so lonely
why do you get made fun of
why does the world you unknowingly hate on
not shower you with love
why won't that cute girl say yes to you
where is your ship to sail in
why do you feel like the wieght of the world
wants to crush the tail end of you?
Just look at yourself
with those judging eyes
think to yourself if u were in their shoes
what would you chose?
Look at yourself
next time u put down
spread luv not hate
plenty to go around
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 43 [informant] => skitzo-da-clown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

second thoughts

Contributed by skitzo-da-clown on Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 06:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Take a look at yourself
with your judging eyes
with the closed minded views
we've grown to despise
you won't let up
or give any tries
to anything new to you
and so you ask why-
Why are you so lonely
why do you get made fun of
why does the world you unknowingly hate on
not shower you with love
why won't that cute girl say yes to you
where is your ship to sail in
why do you feel like the wieght of the world
wants to crush the tail end of you?
Just look at yourself
with those judging eyes
think to yourself if u were in their shoes
what would you chose?
Look at yourself
next time u put down
spread luv not hate
plenty to go around

Copyright © skitzo-da-clown ... [ 2008-03-22 18:00:31]
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Re: second thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 05:50:51 AM AEST
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How that would change the world if we first did this before judging the other...wonderful life lesson expressed in a very good way. Well done.

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