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Array ( [sid] => 141119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am leaving, but only my body. [time] => 2008-03-21 15:10:27 [hometext] => 4 my children, with love [bodytext] => When I leave I give to you,
Everything you want me too.
When I go, don’t ask why,
There will be peace, after you cry.

When you miss me,
Remember I did not flee.
Wonderful are our precious memories.

When you’re angry because I am not there,
Please be calmer, remember I cared.
When you think I am not around,
Lift your head, I will be found.

When you wished I didn’t go,
I will be there, Just so you know.

Our love will still grow stronger each day,
When I die, I leave you my love,
In an amazing way.

I will watch you from a distance,
For you my children I will make a difference.
So when I have to leave,
Remember it's only my body.
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 307 [topic] => 23 [informant] => Keisha [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

I am leaving, but only my body.

Contributed by Keisha on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:10:27 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

When I leave I give to you,
Everything you want me too.
When I go, don’t ask why,
There will be peace, after you cry.

When you miss me,
Remember I did not flee.
Wonderful are our precious memories.

When you’re angry because I am not there,
Please be calmer, remember I cared.
When you think I am not around,
Lift your head, I will be found.

When you wished I didn’t go,
I will be there, Just so you know.

Our love will still grow stronger each day,
When I die, I leave you my love,
In an amazing way.

I will watch you from a distance,
For you my children I will make a difference.
So when I have to leave,
Remember it's only my body.

Copyright Â© Keisha ... [ 2008-03-21 15:10:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:14:08 PM AEST
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Emotions running powerful and raw. Such a heart breaking write filled with love. I hope it is a poem in thoughts and something that is not going on in real life for you..

hugs

Michelle

Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:50:55 PM AEST
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wow so good

Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:56:59 PM AEST
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My sentiments exactly but I'm not planning to check out any time soon.
This is very deep and show the wonders and awes of luv beyond the phycial body.
It's very moving, touching I too hope that you're not on your way.
Please p.m.
big huggs, luv, peace, joy,
emy

Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 04:11:39 PM AEST
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brilliant write!

Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazzyfizzle on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 04:24:40 PM AEST
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beautiful emotions throughout the entire poem. great job

Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 02:27:31 PM AEST
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great write it really shows how much you care for your childern

Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_blue on Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 07:02:27 PM AEST
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so touching, like a letter from beyond.

Re: I am leaving, but only my body. (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 01:08:55 PM AEST
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Nice write. Pure love represented. I wrote a poem about my children, titled, "I Am You." Check it out if you get a chance. Again, nice writing.

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