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[title] => Struggle.
[time] => 2008-03-21 03:41:52
[hometext] => dark, kinda choppy.tell me what you think.
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last words to spare, last chance to feel. Too tired and shaky to care. Too weak and broken to heal. Teary eyes daze away, wrists cut open, blood trickling to the floor. No one is aware. The loneliness now over, residing somewhere away from this hell i've been enclosed within.Finally this struggle has come to an end.
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Struggle.
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
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Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:41:52 AM in AEST
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last words to spare, last chance to feel. Too tired and shaky to care. Too weak and broken to heal. Teary eyes daze away, wrists cut open, blood trickling to the floor. No one is aware. The loneliness now over, residing somewhere away from this hell i've been enclosed within.Finally this struggle has come to an end.
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Re: Struggle.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 08:39:30 AM AEST
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a very good description of someone going through a struggle.. well worded.. nicely done
rock on,
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Re: Struggle.
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by MakeShift_2134 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:07:43 PM AEST
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| This person your writing about must of finally found some peace. |
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Re: Struggle.
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:22:10 PM AEST
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Twisted my feelings with this one.
I do not however agree with suicide, struggle is part of life and some of us have more than others .
Michelle |
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Re: Struggle.
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 04:07:29 PM AEST
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| this is such a great poem and i can relate to it alot i hope whatever you are going through comes to an end :) take care |
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