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Array ( [sid] => 141086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A New Life [time] => 2008-03-20 00:49:55 [hometext] => the hope u get after losing love .. too bad it wont last long .. [bodytext] =>

A New Life:
Why do we all live in pain
And see the pop-ups of our veins
Why does life takes us round
And then strikes us to the ground
Why do people fall in love
And their lives becomes happiness, sort of

Happy, Sad, Depressed, or Suicidal
It's all more like, I've become idle
Nothing felt except pain deep inside
That tells you go, commit your suicide

And then you hear a voice calling
Telling you to end your fooling
Saying she will stop you falling

A voice of a friend or your loved one
A voice you have no control on
It makes you change your mind
And makes you never think behind
A voice that is so kind
It frees you from all your binds

You finally let go
And think it's time to glow
But deep inside you know
That your afraid of that blow

Yet you trust and take
Thinking this might not be a mistake
Your heart was more than scattered
You felt it was more like shattered

And then a healer finds her way
In the midst of the darkest day
When you were wondering astray
She comes and takes you away
With her, day after day
The odd feelings begin fading away
And then without any delay
You find out that your heart is not okay

It have been yet again taken
By the right person who won't be shaken
This time you found your true love
And the person who you only think of

I love you, you say
And send all your troubles like a ray
You have found your "one"
Your life has just begun [comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 2 [informant] => alibof10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A New Life

Contributed by alibof10 on Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 12:49:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





A New Life:
Why do we all live in pain
And see the pop-ups of our veins
Why does life takes us round
And then strikes us to the ground
Why do people fall in love
And their lives becomes happiness, sort of

Happy, Sad, Depressed, or Suicidal
It's all more like, I've become idle
Nothing felt except pain deep inside
That tells you go, commit your suicide

And then you hear a voice calling
Telling you to end your fooling
Saying she will stop you falling

A voice of a friend or your loved one
A voice you have no control on
It makes you change your mind
And makes you never think behind
A voice that is so kind
It frees you from all your binds

You finally let go
And think it's time to glow
But deep inside you know
That your afraid of that blow

Yet you trust and take
Thinking this might not be a mistake
Your heart was more than scattered
You felt it was more like shattered

And then a healer finds her way
In the midst of the darkest day
When you were wondering astray
She comes and takes you away
With her, day after day
The odd feelings begin fading away
And then without any delay
You find out that your heart is not okay

It have been yet again taken
By the right person who won't be shaken
This time you found your true love
And the person who you only think of

I love you, you say
And send all your troubles like a ray
You have found your "one"
Your life has just begun




Copyright © alibof10 ... [ 2008-03-20 00:49:55]
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Re: A New Life (User Rating: 1 )
by prabal77 on Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 07:49:32 AM AEST
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lovely poem...gives hope...
keep on the good work...




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