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Array ( [sid] => 141075 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Diminished Thoughts [time] => 2008-03-19 14:34:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Another endless bleeding day
Again creates a needing stray…
A night of endless pleading may
Weave a dream to a ceding prey.

Aside these reckless dreams betrayed,
A fond waking thought seems mislaid.
As this helpless heart’s screams evade
Capture as its vast schemes pervade.

Longing for one true caring hold;
Instead all of this tearing rolled
Into piercing eyes, staring cold…
Repenting all this baring told.

Dreaming through this unshaken trance;
Opposing this mistaken glance…
Pondering this retaken stance,
Attempting to awaken chance.
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Diminished Thoughts

Contributed by wizard on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 02:34:44 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Another endless bleeding day
Again creates a needing stray…
A night of endless pleading may
Weave a dream to a ceding prey.

Aside these reckless dreams betrayed,
A fond waking thought seems mislaid.
As this helpless heart’s screams evade
Capture as its vast schemes pervade.

Longing for one true caring hold;
Instead all of this tearing rolled
Into piercing eyes, staring cold…
Repenting all this baring told.

Dreaming through this unshaken trance;
Opposing this mistaken glance…
Pondering this retaken stance,
Attempting to awaken chance.




Copyright © wizard ... [ 2008-03-19 14:34:44]
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Re: Diminished Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by CuttersAngel on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 02:51:19 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. Nice rhyming!!!


Re: Diminished Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by kissingsolitude on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 04:36:12 PM AEST
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i love this poem....it was so great




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