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Array ( [sid] => 141058 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lock On My Heart [time] => 2008-03-18 17:17:50 [hometext] => I've dated a new women for two months now..She totally had me from hello! I really,really felt love for this women, Actually someone who could get me over my ex.....But now out of nowhere...She said I was to good for her...She said I was to nice to her :( [bodytext] => A lock on my heart

Right from the start

It’s from my past

Because it didn’t last...



So the aftermath was through

A new day shines in true

Because I believe and know

And I prove it when I show...



That’s what I find for when I seek

I work so hard to be unique

To show my love for her needs

I’ll even get down on bending knees...



So you agreed to chat with thee

So we spent our evenings just you and me

Page after page we wrote in lust

I knew right then you were a must...



I didn’t wanna let you in

But your words revealed no sin

Everything you said was like

Come on in...



And as I did your greeting so pure

All I felt your love of cure

Heart to heart and talking without blue

You make me see the real inside you...



I said then and there something very true

When I said there’s something about you

I wasen’t wrong I was right

Because you shown me some delite...



Then I see you and meet up with you

Your beautiful responce as we grew

That night all I could do

Was look into your eyes and carry through...



So I did and then kissed you

From that point on

There was no blue

It was your love I feel into...



After times had passed and I was so true

I did my all flying into

Did I not always come to see only you

I sure did and it was all I could do...



But a shock a time later I felt

As my heart begin to melt

When I heard the news

I was about to loose....



What did I do oh so wrong

To change your heart

To make you part

Remember the start...



When things were good, New and free

All we had was such glee

I was so happy to never see

Another tear fall from me...



But you left so fast without a note

It’s kinda like you sped away on a boat

Away up and out

Now I sit and pout...



But I’m hurt and lost again

I’ve turned right back inta sin

I’m angry and mad and have no soul

You left my head haning oh so low...



But that’s ok I understand now

Always remember Big "B"

You left me with a wow

You touched me somehow...



So now we apart

You leavin’ me was unsmart

All I can say

Lock on my heart...
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Lock On My Heart

Contributed by 143 on Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 05:17:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



A lock on my heart

Right from the start

It’s from my past

Because it didn’t last...



So the aftermath was through

A new day shines in true

Because I believe and know

And I prove it when I show...



That’s what I find for when I seek

I work so hard to be unique

To show my love for her needs

I’ll even get down on bending knees...



So you agreed to chat with thee

So we spent our evenings just you and me

Page after page we wrote in lust

I knew right then you were a must...



I didn’t wanna let you in

But your words revealed no sin

Everything you said was like

Come on in...



And as I did your greeting so pure

All I felt your love of cure

Heart to heart and talking without blue

You make me see the real inside you...



I said then and there something very true

When I said there’s something about you

I wasen’t wrong I was right

Because you shown me some delite...



Then I see you and meet up with you

Your beautiful responce as we grew

That night all I could do

Was look into your eyes and carry through...



So I did and then kissed you

From that point on

There was no blue

It was your love I feel into...



After times had passed and I was so true

I did my all flying into

Did I not always come to see only you

I sure did and it was all I could do...



But a shock a time later I felt

As my heart begin to melt

When I heard the news

I was about to loose....



What did I do oh so wrong

To change your heart

To make you part

Remember the start...



When things were good, New and free

All we had was such glee

I was so happy to never see

Another tear fall from me...



But you left so fast without a note

It’s kinda like you sped away on a boat

Away up and out

Now I sit and pout...



But I’m hurt and lost again

I’ve turned right back inta sin

I’m angry and mad and have no soul

You left my head haning oh so low...



But that’s ok I understand now

Always remember Big "B"

You left me with a wow

You touched me somehow...



So now we apart

You leavin’ me was unsmart

All I can say

Lock on my heart...




Copyright © 143 ... [ 2008-03-18 17:17:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Lock On My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 01:52:23 PM AEST
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Wow, you sure got it on paper really good.
Sad but good.
huggs, smiles,
emy




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