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Deep down I feel
Contributed by
Allidoiswrite82
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 02:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Come see me...
See me as I am
As you would a fresh new flower
Or that Strom in the distance
Conquering the clouds
running from the its path...
See me as you would a stranger
New life minus the danger
Look at my exterior
My nose
My mouth
The Superior-ness
Of Gods given gifts
Walk with me...
As the wind does
Gently
brushing against this brown boys cheeks
Unbiased as to what I've been through
Pushing me along the earths beautiful surface
Talk with me...
The way you would
A long lost friend
from way back when life
was completely different
Prior to the parting
Of life lines
The you go your way
And me mines
Listen to me...
No scratch that hear me
each and every sy-ll-able
feel the beat on a heart
that is not your own
My need is to be welcomed home
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Allidoiswrite82
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2008-03-18 14:28:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Deep down I feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by a7x36 on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 08:02:07 PM AEST (User
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you're an amazing artist. regardless of whether i can feel what you feel or see the same situation, the words are assembled so well that i can always appreciate it as art. that is particularly true for this write |
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