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attack us all
plotting vengence
seeping through the bloodstream
hating the person in the way

tornado wreck
broken bones
lost homes

rebuild it all
make everything aligned
take away what wrath has left behind

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Lips of wrath

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 06:59:04 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Lips of wrath
attack us all
plotting vengence
seeping through the bloodstream
hating the person in the way

tornado wreck
broken bones
lost homes

rebuild it all
make everything aligned
take away what wrath has left behind

**vampyress Jenni*

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2008-03-16 06:59:04]
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Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 12:41:32 PM AEST
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I love how this can have many meanings and we can take from it what we will....... The ending is hopeful and strong, nicely done.

Michelle

Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 12:55:09 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written, friend.
Huggs,
emy

Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 03:35:26 PM AEST
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This was brillant. The devistation of the opening leads to the hope of something better and a new start. I agree with Michelle we will take what we will from this poem because it does have various meanings and things it can be related to. Well done.

Take care
Christina

Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 09:06:35 PM AEST
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jenni,

Nice one - a good approach to human and natural disasters, given that we can't always avoid them. However, we can cover their tracks with new beauty.

Spike

Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 07:44:48 AM AEST
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Make's one think, a strong message you have here, jenn, a peice beautiful serious writting.

Ben

Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 07:35:28 PM AEST
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Good poem, Jennitude :-)

I like the way you compare what appears to be a back stabbing rumor rouser to a tornado. Cool. Aaaaand, how the person being attacked was able to get pass that and come back to happiness at the end. Least that is what I got out of it.

Nice,

Timmy
:-)

Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:20:56 PM AEST
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Very excellent use of poetic conservation with an excellent use of images

Again, I like your style.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond

Re: Lips of wrath (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 06:19:51 AM AEST
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Jenni ... this was tormenting at first, but then so beautiful
in the end. Hope, like the rays of sun, spill over the entire piece
and create a warmth that floods the heart with light.

Wonderful write, hun. Full of thought and emotion.

~Breezy

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