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Array ( [sid] => 140956 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Free To Leave [time] => 2008-03-13 06:19:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I stay happy thoughout these days
It's the thing I do to get away
From all the pain and all the tears
I don't let anyone hear

Pre:
This seems so surreal
And so I sing it out

Chorus:
The other day when you said we're through
I thought my heart would snap in two
But now I see that I can breathe
So you are free to leave
I know no matter what I do
My world's somehow a deeper blue
Now I see that I can breathe
And so you're free to leave

We shoulda talked before it was dead
But things went wrong and all you said
Was that you could no longer be with me
And that was the end of 'we'

P & C

You put me through hell and made me low
I tolerated more than you could ever know
This storey always ends the same
Me standing alone with most all the blame
It happens over and over and over again ....

P & C (x2 [second fading])
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 52 [informant] => althea_kendry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Free To Leave

Contributed by althea_kendry on Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 06:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I stay happy thoughout these days
It's the thing I do to get away
From all the pain and all the tears
I don't let anyone hear

Pre:
This seems so surreal
And so I sing it out

Chorus:
The other day when you said we're through
I thought my heart would snap in two
But now I see that I can breathe
So you are free to leave
I know no matter what I do
My world's somehow a deeper blue
Now I see that I can breathe
And so you're free to leave

We shoulda talked before it was dead
But things went wrong and all you said
Was that you could no longer be with me
And that was the end of 'we'

P & C

You put me through hell and made me low
I tolerated more than you could ever know
This storey always ends the same
Me standing alone with most all the blame
It happens over and over and over again ....

P & C (x2 [second fading])




Copyright © althea_kendry ... [ 2008-03-13 06:19:05]
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Re: Free To Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 07:17:16 AM AEST
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You've got a hit here.
Awesome work.
I certainly can relate.
huggs,
emy


Re: Free To Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 11:03:18 AM AEST
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Your rhyming was quite good, some interesting rhymes are dispersed throughout, and overall I think it was a pretty solid post. Nice job.




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