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Array ( [sid] => 140885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eyes Like the Night Dreaming... [time] => 2008-03-09 16:15:10 [hometext] => Vampyric Verses [bodytext] => ~***~
The storm came casting evening
deep into the shadows bleeding.
Eyes like the night dreaming...
Eyes of mist in swirling blue

The night so hot , so sensual
Deep , red and luscious lips
Grinning teeth. Licking , biting ,
longing for vampyric kiss

Twilight deep in bleeding shadow.
Fountains in the rain. Little
statues weep like fallen angels
Found your ecstacy in pain

I lean so carelessly. I'm waiting
dressed to kill and will my lady.
Eyes fade like flowers decaying
but have no fear my love

for soon you will live again.
~***~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 13 [informant] => doug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Eyes Like the Night Dreaming...

Contributed by doug on Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:15:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

~***~
The storm came casting evening
deep into the shadows bleeding.
Eyes like the night dreaming...
Eyes of mist in swirling blue

The night so hot , so sensual
Deep , red and luscious lips
Grinning teeth. Licking , biting ,
longing for vampyric kiss

Twilight deep in bleeding shadow.
Fountains in the rain. Little
statues weep like fallen angels
Found your ecstacy in pain

I lean so carelessly. I'm waiting
dressed to kill and will my lady.
Eyes fade like flowers decaying
but have no fear my love

for soon you will live again.
~***~

Copyright © doug ... [ 2008-03-09 16:15:10]
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Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:52:15 PM AEST
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Geez doug you did great with this, sent a chill down my spine for a second there........ I got garlic LOL

Michelle

twilight deep in bleeding sleep that rocks!

Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming... (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 07:05:14 AM AEST
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excellent poem, although not quite what I was expecting. I especially like the third verse. Glad to see new work by you.

Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming... (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 09:04:45 PM AEST
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Oh, my little black heart is all aflutter...

A powerful beauty, with moonflesh... I love this. I love the dark images you convey, the mist-filled cemeteries, and black lace... Exquisitely vampiric. And your form is very reminiscent of Type O Negative. I really hope you make this into a song. I'll listen to it on a stormy night with eyes closed and a soft smile. Absolutely beautiful, my friend. I hope you dabble more into this soon. I miss your writings. =)

With love and black roses,

A fellow shadow in the night,

~S.

Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:17:56 AM AEST
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doug, this was a beautifully dark piece of desire,
need and possession. You do justice to these
writes, my friend. With every word, I am
captivated against my will. lol Must be the
allure of the dark side. Completely gripping!

well done poet!

~ Breezy

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