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Again
Contributed by
midnight_writer
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Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 09:01:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Smiles, empty glances and stares; glares.
Across this room of void, full of silence and empty thoughts.
My past looks me dead -
From those darkened eyes
I know if I look up again for that second glance
I'll never turn away.
What happens when my curiosity builds,
To become stronger then my self-control?
What happens when I lose it all again?
Without a grasp I don't know if I have a handle on this.
And you look at me, think I'm writing of you.
You've been reduced to a single line -
The satifaction could last a lifetime.
This cold creeps in worse then heat to make you blush -
I swear, these shrinking veins of ice;
So fine they'll snap if I make the slightest wrong move.
But what choice do I have?
Will you breathe just a flicker of life back into these dying thoughts?
Even my writing couldn't save me
I had to look back just one more time, and I'm gone...
Again
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Re: Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 04:45:50 PM AEST (User
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Deep and powerful and wonderfully written.
I like your writing style. And I like this poem.
Take care
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Re: Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by KandeMac on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 03:46:46 AM AEST (User
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I can completely relate to this. Well written! It was almost like reading my feelings for someone at this very moment.
Wonderful! I completely enjoyed it.
Kande |
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