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Array ( [sid] => 140837 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crashing To A Full Stop [time] => 2008-03-07 10:40:04 [hometext] => What can happen if you don't get punctuation and spelling quite right.Written this way to prove a point.If you want to understand it better, try reading it without all the punctuation. [bodytext] => Without, correct punctuation sometimes, words lose their way
Sentences rush, in like a wild river with no conclusion.
Do you ? understand what I'm trying to convey !
Here, or is the structure somewhat broken

Meaning is, meaning less where, the framework doesn't fit
Appoint is no more a point if it fails to be made
This art ? of words that play, with the mind
rules, must be followed no place for abstraction;

I cannot.Stress the importance of making scents
Loose an audience in a tapestry not in a web
Unclouded in sight, perhaps an insight !
Shrouded, in confusion a journey is never made

Language is a barrier that need not be
Sculpt the proper form with the pieces that fit
Set free imagination, let it rise and soar
Not hurtle back to earth, crashing to a full stop [comments] => 6 [counter] => 369 [topic] => 69 [informant] => puppy_dog_Eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => poets )
Crashing To A Full Stop

Contributed by puppy_dog_Eyes on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 10:40:04 AM in AEST
Topic: poets



Without, correct punctuation sometimes, words lose their way
Sentences rush, in like a wild river with no conclusion.
Do you ? understand what I'm trying to convey !
Here, or is the structure somewhat broken

Meaning is, meaning less where, the framework doesn't fit
Appoint is no more a point if it fails to be made
This art ? of words that play, with the mind
rules, must be followed no place for abstraction;

I cannot.Stress the importance of making scents
Loose an audience in a tapestry not in a web
Unclouded in sight, perhaps an insight !
Shrouded, in confusion a journey is never made

Language is a barrier that need not be
Sculpt the proper form with the pieces that fit
Set free imagination, let it rise and soar
Not hurtle back to earth, crashing to a full stop




Copyright © puppy_dog_Eyes ... [ 2008-03-07 10:40:04]
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Re: Crashing To A Full Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by KatsMeow on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 11:58:33 AM AEST
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Bravo! How true this is...what we say, what others hear, especially on the net, can be two totally different conversations....his side, her side, and the truth :) Keep up the good work!!! xxx


Re: Crashing To A Full Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 12:13:15 PM AEST
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I loved this and the point came across exact lol.....

Michelle


Re: Crashing To A Full Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 01:06:21 PM AEST
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Interesting concept. i truly enjoyed this poem!


Re: Crashing To A Full Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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Good flow
good topic
well done.


Re: Crashing To A Full Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 08:41:40 PM AEST
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crappy punctuation, disconnected sentences and dyslexic spelling, and a stacatto stop-start metre like granny trying to reverse park the Hillman. Excellent. Hopefully there, are, -a few..poets, listening!

Spike the pedant


Re: Crashing To A Full Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:09:29 PM AEST
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ur concept was perfectly illustrated.

i never did think about this in the way you did, interesting

if i was OCD, reading that would've made my head explode




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