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I’m aware that you’ve moved on
To what will be a happy life,
Where I can’t do you wrong

And I know that I have messed things up
And caused you so much pain
It breaks my heart, knowing it’s my fault,
I’ll never hold you again

Instead I’ll forever be there as your friend,
Of that you shouldn’t worry.
But by writing this, while I cry alone at night,
I’m comforted that you know I’m sorry. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 22 [informant] => andrew13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Regret

Contributed by andrew13 on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 11:56:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I’m not writing this to win you back
I’m aware that you’ve moved on
To what will be a happy life,
Where I can’t do you wrong

And I know that I have messed things up
And caused you so much pain
It breaks my heart, knowing it’s my fault,
I’ll never hold you again

Instead I’ll forever be there as your friend,
Of that you shouldn’t worry.
But by writing this, while I cry alone at night,
I’m comforted that you know I’m sorry.

Copyright Â© andrew13 ... [ 2008-03-06 11:56:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 12:31:13 PM AEST
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Nice first post, you paid attention to your rhyme scheme pretty well, sounded very cathartic overall. Welcome to YPDC, hope you enjoy your time around here :)

Re: My Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 02:42:15 PM AEST
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Wonderful first write, I agree with fielding on this. Welcome to YPDC

Michelle

Re: My Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 03:12:40 PM AEST
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This poem speaks from the heart... it's how I feel right now. Thank you.
Keep up the writing!

Re: My Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 04:06:42 PM AEST
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Excellent write. I now how you feel. I too have had to watch the one I love walk away in anothers arms. You feel your heart crumbling one cell at a time.

Re: My Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by constantlyme on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 09:22:08 AM AEST
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Im new to this too, but that was a beautiful poem, 1st one or not. I hope you write more!
- Danielle

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