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Decimated by ones before
Torturous memories
Of an unrequited love
Yet the heart still beats
Surviving if only for a dream
Or is it a forgotten memory
Of what it is to be complete

Struggling to survive
Gaining strength from within,
Faith that what was
Can be found once again
Sustained in a moment
Embedded in time,
In true love’s fashion
Forgiveness we might find

Mending mutilation
Caused by indifference
Of a wandering heart
In the recesses of yesterday
Memories lay bare
A small burning ember
Caressed by passion
Ignites the fire of years

Touched by the moment
Star-crossed lovers meet
Tenderness has surfaced
True love’s warm embrace
For a single heartfelt touch
From the depths of your soul
Awakens the devotion
We pledged to uphold

Peace
~Shannon~ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 337 [topic] => 24 [informant] => LoveStruck_Hippie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Fashioned in Time

Contributed by LoveStruck_Hippie on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 03:13:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

A heart lies broken
Decimated by ones before
Torturous memories
Of an unrequited love
Yet the heart still beats
Surviving if only for a dream
Or is it a forgotten memory
Of what it is to be complete

Struggling to survive
Gaining strength from within,
Faith that what was
Can be found once again
Sustained in a moment
Embedded in time,
In true love’s fashion
Forgiveness we might find

Mending mutilation
Caused by indifference
Of a wandering heart
In the recesses of yesterday
Memories lay bare
A small burning ember
Caressed by passion
Ignites the fire of years

Touched by the moment
Star-crossed lovers meet
Tenderness has surfaced
True love’s warm embrace
For a single heartfelt touch
From the depths of your soul
Awakens the devotion
We pledged to uphold

Peace
~Shannon~

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Re: Fashioned in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 04:23:13 AM AEST
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Very well said. Nice job.

Re: Fashioned in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 12:27:49 PM AEST
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Holy moly, I loved this. Maybe I'm just in the mood to be floored by this genre of poetry, but wow, I was really enjoying reading this thing. I loved your word choice, the descriptive lines throughout were really, really (I've said 'really' too much...) great, and the first stanza is probably my favorite, it's what hooked me from the beginning. Kudos to you, this was excellent.

Re: Fashioned in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 01:31:52 PM AEST
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Words that flowed and kept the heart........What a wonderful piece..

Brew~

Re: Fashioned in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by constantlyme on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 02:55:45 AM AEST
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Loved this, really beautiful.
'Memories lay bare
A small burning ember
Caressed by passion
Ignites the fire of years' - lovely

-Danielle

Re: Fashioned in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 11:11:14 AM AEST
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Held me in its grip from the first word to the last.
Beautiful and tender

Steve

Re: Fashioned in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 12:49:33 PM AEST
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" Yet the heart still beats Surviving if only for a dream" . . . I gotta tell you this line floored me.
Your style is second only to the writting itself.
This peice is inescapably compelling, truly
a beautiful poetic work . . .

take care my friend . . .

Ben

Re: Fashioned in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 05:49:46 AM AEST
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This piece rents a lot of space in my head its pace carries me to those moments where I have tasted such warmth. I look forward to reviewing more of your work.

Peace
AJ

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