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Array ( [sid] => 140764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love's Prominence [time] => 2008-03-04 10:04:29 [hometext] => The immense feeling that overcomes everything... And anything. [bodytext] => She's like the last word in a novel,
the epithet of climax...
her love, like a glove,
that fits snug, ever proceeding...
Immortal, love.

Vast blue oceans would barely compare
to her sapphire eyes' stare
and the sparkle lights more in me
than a thousand stars on a cloudless night.

Like the loneliness of a crowded room
suddenly blooming with the presence of One,
that the romance of cuddling by fireside
barely scratch the comparison of her.

A love unlike addiction, an obsession of passion
as if rain fell from the heavens
and the dew drops lay in a kiss
of imputed desire...

Angel face, a smile that invokes compassion
in a fast paced world
and as time stands still;
a moment passes that displaces
all the wrong doing of the world.

If simple words that come to mind
could only describe
the feelings within...

I love you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 447 [topic] => 9 [informant] => Kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AnniversaryPoems )
Love's Prominence

Contributed by Kellros on Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 10:04:29 AM in AEST
Topic: AnniversaryPoems



She's like the last word in a novel,
the epithet of climax...
her love, like a glove,
that fits snug, ever proceeding...
Immortal, love.

Vast blue oceans would barely compare
to her sapphire eyes' stare
and the sparkle lights more in me
than a thousand stars on a cloudless night.

Like the loneliness of a crowded room
suddenly blooming with the presence of One,
that the romance of cuddling by fireside
barely scratch the comparison of her.

A love unlike addiction, an obsession of passion
as if rain fell from the heavens
and the dew drops lay in a kiss
of imputed desire...

Angel face, a smile that invokes compassion
in a fast paced world
and as time stands still;
a moment passes that displaces
all the wrong doing of the world.

If simple words that come to mind
could only describe
the feelings within...

I love you.




Copyright © Kellros ... [ 2008-03-04 10:04:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Love's Prominence (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 12:31:45 PM AEST
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This is a beautifully written declaration of your love.
Your descriptions are striking and heart felt.

Peace

~Shannon


Re: Love's Prominence (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 07:38:19 AM AEST
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Wow what flowing words, that pour from within.! Very beautiful


brew~


Re: Love's Prominence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 05:15:26 AM AEST
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Dis vrek mooi :) jy is gelukkig om iemand soos sy te hê! Koester dit elke dag, dit is spesiaal *
Groete daar
Anna


Re: Love's Prominence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 05:15:34 AM AEST
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Dis vrek mooi :) jy is gelukkig om iemand soos sy te hê! Koester dit elke dag, dit is spesiaal *
Groete daar
Anna




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