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Array ( [sid] => 14072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Why Am I Given This? [time] => 2003-03-11 07:00:00 [hometext] => I've been through a whole lotta suicidal feelings and all that stuff lately. Well this poem jsut describes how I feel. Not exactly what I HAVE. Just feel..I feel so confused I can't hear or see a thing. Just wanted to write a poem. thanks [bodytext] => A heart of fear
A cloud of anger
A tear of stress
A cry of danger
A frown of sadness
A feeling that’s lifeless
A word of darkness
A friend of loneliness
A world of war
A thought to distroy
A shadow of sin
A chance that won’t begin
A sea of emptiness
A goal without sucess
A touch of death
A life that was left
A eye that cannot see
A ear that cannot listen
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Why Am I Given This?

Contributed by orangeman on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A heart of fear
A cloud of anger
A tear of stress
A cry of danger
A frown of sadness
A feeling that’s lifeless
A word of darkness
A friend of loneliness
A world of war
A thought to distroy
A shadow of sin
A chance that won’t begin
A sea of emptiness
A goal without sucess
A touch of death
A life that was left
A eye that cannot see
A ear that cannot listen
For these were the things I was given

Copyright Â© orangeman ... [ 2003-03-11 07:00:00]
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Re: Why Am I Given This? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:35:11 AM AEST
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Cheer up ......I hope you feel better about yourself.....You have covered so much hurt in this poem.....You have a real talent....what will you write next.....maybe a secret love.....best of luck...take care

Re: Why Am I Given This? (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 01:24:49 PM AEST
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oohh...i love this...

Re: Why Am I Given This? (User Rating: 1 )
by Gribba on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 03:20:04 PM AEST
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WOW!!!
I know these feelings and you just told me with words what they are!!!
I like how you take the sences and make them come alife and each sentens makes me want to read more.

Re: Why Am I Given This? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 01:17:13 AM AEST
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Great poem very emotional hopefully writing out how u feel helps u deal with itbetter. Keep on writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Why Am I Given This? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 01:30:59 AM AEST
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Great depth shown here... Loved this...
Jenni

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