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A world of hope adorns my night sleep
liberty and tolerance to escort me to the
paradise in my trance; where egos fail to
endure and cupidity suffocate.

Love is the sweet fragrance of the blooming
tender blossoms, which runs down the root
to enhance the fruit that nourishes dream
dwellers with simple Godly truth.

War and blood shed never heard off,
treachery and backstabbing never known
jealousy and hunger a sensation unknown,
the place in my dream is for all humankind
to know.

Wish not to return from the pleasant world nevertheless,
my alarm stock piercingly, yelled to tell, it’s only a dream.
-FRANCO-

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 48 [informant] => FRANCO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

In My Sleep

Contributed by FRANCO on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 12:25:43 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A world of hope adorns my night sleep
liberty and tolerance to escort me to the
paradise in my trance; where egos fail to
endure and cupidity suffocate.

Love is the sweet fragrance of the blooming
tender blossoms, which runs down the root
to enhance the fruit that nourishes dream
dwellers with simple Godly truth.

War and blood shed never heard off,
treachery and backstabbing never known
jealousy and hunger a sensation unknown,
the place in my dream is for all humankind
to know.

Wish not to return from the pleasant world nevertheless,
my alarm stock piercingly, yelled to tell, it’s only a dream.
-FRANCO-

Copyright Â© FRANCO ... [ 2008-03-02 00:25:43]
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Re: In My Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by MakeShift_2134 on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 11:30:10 AM AEST
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Very moving. If only we could turn our dreams into reality.

Re: In My Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 01:20:00 PM AEST
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well i donyt know what ypdc is...
but that is verry touching...
i like it...
it really sux...
cuz..
everybody wants the perfect world
that only exist in their dreams...
if only it could be real...
s oeverybody could see how great life really is..

Bridgette

Re: In My Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 03:49:01 PM AEST
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Has it been two years already, Franco?? Wow... It seems like only yesterday we met. I've always enjoyed your poetry and I know I always will. Even though I am not here as much, I do pop in every now and then. I am so glad I did tonight.
Hope all is well with you and your son.
A sister's hug...
Jenni

Re: In My Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 08:10:30 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. "to enhance the fruit that nourishes dreams" - stunning.

Re: In My Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 01:13:57 PM AEST
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You know my old friend, I want to live where you find repose. It sounds
so heavenly. There is a comfort we find in dreams that holds our hearts in
hope of better things to come, no? It's unfortunate that we awake to the
cruelty of the world instead of the beauty that is your dream.

Well done, poet. You have captured a soul once again with your
beauty and flowing words.

with respect and admiration,

~ Breezy

Re: In My Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by LindaMary on Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 03:46:56 PM AEST
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I believe God afford us this place for hope and dreams to be for a moment in time a reality until yes we are awaken by the alarm clock...Beautifully written and expressed so well from a heart so tender.

Love,
LindaMary

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