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Array ( [sid] => 140700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Parting [time] => 2008-03-01 12:12:46 [hometext] => cowrite ~Shelby and Crow~ [bodytext] => Through mist and rain
we felt tears fall
capturing each other and parting.

Essence mixed with softness,
where is the sweetness in sorrow.

Why do we trace every moment,
and lie with its pain at night.
rain falls tracing this window
wind whispers our thoughts.

Lover`s kiss from the depths you remember
brings no light to the heart..
you cry at every beginning
somewhere inside it remains....Shelby/ Vincent [comments] => 5 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 32 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Parting

Contributed by shelby on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Through mist and rain
we felt tears fall
capturing each other and parting.

Essence mixed with softness,
where is the sweetness in sorrow.

Why do we trace every moment,
and lie with its pain at night.
rain falls tracing this window
wind whispers our thoughts.

Lover`s kiss from the depths you remember
brings no light to the heart..
you cry at every beginning
somewhere inside it remains....Shelby/ Vincent




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Re: Parting (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:37:01 PM AEST
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wow....
alot of feeling...
i know how you feel...
been through it before....
but things will get better and eventualy it wont hurt as bad...
but the feeling never really goes away...
but over time it wont hurt as bad....
good luck


Re: Parting (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 05:08:15 PM AEST
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wow this is extremely powerful and passionate in emotions.. its very errily sad and makes you think about certain things .. this is beautious!! great job

Vampyress Jenni


Re: Parting (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 12:16:50 AM AEST
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Awesome write...like always!
Raw emotions and passionate.
Beautiful words...
A touching write that leaves it's mark!
Well done Shelby.

~~Oceandreamer~~


Re: Parting (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 12:05:21 PM AEST
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good job my friends

Shari


Re: Parting (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 03:52:51 PM AEST
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Great collaboration, you two....
Beautifully written altthogh so sad..
Hugs
Jenni




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