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Array ( [sid] => 140694 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Position Of Sadness. [time] => 2008-03-01 08:00:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Mind guessing
Fingers pressing
Against the temples of my mind
Solace I cannot find
A photograph pressed to my chest
Tears stain the place
I lay my head to rest
This is my position of sadness
I escape reality
Into my grim fatality
Fists clenched
Wrists drenched
In all the love I've bled
Memories stained red
This is where I lay
Where I pray
Where I rest in pieces
As my body releases
Broken emotions
Twisted notions
Sinking
Thinking
About the things I cannot undo
Staring at the photograph of you
Still pressed to my chest
Just to be able to feel you near
Right here...
In my position of sadness. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 32 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Position Of Sadness.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 08:00:35 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Mind guessing
Fingers pressing
Against the temples of my mind
Solace I cannot find
A photograph pressed to my chest
Tears stain the place
I lay my head to rest
This is my position of sadness
I escape reality
Into my grim fatality
Fists clenched
Wrists drenched
In all the love I've bled
Memories stained red
This is where I lay
Where I pray
Where I rest in pieces
As my body releases
Broken emotions
Twisted notions
Sinking
Thinking
About the things I cannot undo
Staring at the photograph of you
Still pressed to my chest
Just to be able to feel you near
Right here...
In my position of sadness.

Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2008-03-01 08:00:35]
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Re: Position Of Sadness. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 11:58:15 AM AEST
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I felt each moment and word of this write. The manner in which you wrote it just added to its depth of feeling and emotion.

Where I rest in pieces......... god that is hitting you have spilled yourself over poetic very poetic.........

Sorry for the heartache though.......

Michelle

Re: Position Of Sadness. (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:49:47 PM AEST
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wow...that was intence...i think its a really good poem...but one question...do you really want to do that?...die?...i mean i know my poems are like that but wen i think about it...i dont want to die...thats just the toughts that go through my head....i was aondering if it was the same for you.....or am i the only one...haha....

Re: Position Of Sadness. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 05:11:35 PM AEST
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this is very intensly emotional and painful to read.. you got alot of feeling into this .. a beautiful written melody of ones sadness.. lovely work

rock on,
vampyress Jenni

Re: Position Of Sadness. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 11:36:38 AM AEST
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you have descibed an emotion and pain that is hard to bear and one that i have felt for a long time.
very good write. one of my favorites so far.

Ravyn

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