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the best thing you ever had
is gone and isnt coming back
the tears run down so sad
the pain you feel when that thing is gone
even if it was barley there
the emptyness inside your heart
the one your tears to bear
have you ever felt like love was a fairy tale
but a love that had no end
a love that no one can wreck
that noone can tear or bend
but one day you realised
your love was all a lie
and you wish you were someone else
or that you could just die
have you ever felt like your crashing in a airplaine
even if you havent been in the sky
have you ever felt like questioning god
and ending your prayers in why

to all the ppl that read this please comment them
your words inspire everyone to try harder if you dont like it
or write more if you do

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 22 [informant] => xxbleeding_throughxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

have you ever felt

Contributed by xxbleeding_throughxx on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 03:57:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

have you ever felt like everything was ending
the best thing you ever had
is gone and isnt coming back
the tears run down so sad
the pain you feel when that thing is gone
even if it was barley there
the emptyness inside your heart
the one your tears to bear
have you ever felt like love was a fairy tale
but a love that had no end
a love that no one can wreck
that noone can tear or bend
but one day you realised
your love was all a lie
and you wish you were someone else
or that you could just die
have you ever felt like your crashing in a airplaine
even if you havent been in the sky
have you ever felt like questioning god
and ending your prayers in why

to all the ppl that read this please comment them
your words inspire everyone to try harder if you dont like it
or write more if you do

Copyright © xxbleeding_throughxx ... [ 2008-03-01 03:57:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: have you ever felt (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 01:09:39 PM AEST
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yeah..ive felt that way and it was horrible it hated it...but eventualy the the feeling went away....i hope you dont feel like it....if so im sorry..

Re: have you ever felt (User Rating: 1 )
by constantlyme on Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 03:49:43 AM AEST
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Beautifully written - painfully honest.
loved it.
Danielle

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