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You say yours has too,
We hardly know one another.

A brief moment in time,
A feeling so sublime,
You not being here is harder.

Hours spent in each other’s arms,
To my heart it was like balm,
You were so close to being my lover.

So quickly you were gone,
Leaving my heart without a song.
This almost makes life tougher.

It is so odd how you swept into my life,
I didn’t even feel my strife.
You are quite the charmer.

The thought of you makes me break out in a smile,
You put all my bad feelings into exile,
I feel like such a dreamer.

DP

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The brief encounter with Craziness

Contributed by little_genna on Friday, 29th February 2008 @ 01:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My life has gone crazy since you,
You say yours has too,
We hardly know one another.

A brief moment in time,
A feeling so sublime,
You not being here is harder.

Hours spent in each other’s arms,
To my heart it was like balm,
You were so close to being my lover.

So quickly you were gone,
Leaving my heart without a song.
This almost makes life tougher.

It is so odd how you swept into my life,
I didn’t even feel my strife.
You are quite the charmer.

The thought of you makes me break out in a smile,
You put all my bad feelings into exile,
I feel like such a dreamer.

DP

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Re: The brief encounter with Craziness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 11:26:08 AM AEST
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Girl,
Your really did it justice with your title.
Very good work.
Remember, one day at a time.
A masterpeice of beauty and wonder.
Luv ya,
emy

Re: The brief encounter with Craziness (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:04:02 PM AEST
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I have to agree with emy, the title really is the hook that draws you in.
The good thing is that the rest of the poem keeps you on the hook from first to last word

Steve

Re: The brief encounter with Craziness (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 01:24:38 PM AEST
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wow..
thats crazy...
ive had that hapen but were good friends...but i like it....great emotinal expressions...

Re: The brief encounter with Craziness (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 06:24:06 AM AEST
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such is life...of brief encounters, longings and a barrelfull of possibilities...
someone has wisely said
...care more than others think is wise;
...risk more than others think is safe;
...dream more than others think is practical;
...expect more than others think is possible.

wonderful write..

Love always,
Umang.

Re: The brief encounter with Craziness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 01:54:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, laced with deep sincereity
and emotional output. great writting . . .

Ben

Re: The brief encounter with Craziness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 02:36:45 AM AEST
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Wow, what a great experience, and great job putting it into flowing words. I enjoyed this and lived vicariously for a moment. Thank you.

~Jesse

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