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pouring brilliant rays
against my skin
waiting for the first flower to bloom
my nose longs
for the sweet smell
rain drops warm
falling down to feed
the green
ah spring is coming soon
to rid away these
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Rise sweet spring!

Contributed by mckayla on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

oh how I long for the sun
pouring brilliant rays
against my skin
waiting for the first flower to bloom
my nose longs
for the sweet smell
rain drops warm
falling down to feed
the green
ah spring is coming soon
to rid away these
winter blues!

Copyright © mckayla ... [ 2003-03-11 04:00:00]
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Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:25:51 AM AEST
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simply beautiful. venkat

Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:11:36 PM AEST
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beautifully written, love this:)

Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 10:42:52 PM AEST
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so true, so beautiful...a lovely read...nicely done, katherine...
ta
rosie

Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 09:17:06 PM AEST
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aren't we all waiting for spring to arrive ... esp. us in New England

Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 02:21:37 PM AEST
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i cant wait either makayla...thank you for sharing....its beautiful..

Lindsey

Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:28:41 PM AEST
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it is so true, i think you have spoken for many of us in this poem, well done

Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:27:08 AM AEST
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yes someone bring the sun....maybe with more poems like this

Re: Rise sweet spring! (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:02:02 AM AEST
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this is a beautifull way of writing about a less then cheerfull feeling, well done I wish I had the skill to do that

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