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Sparkled, feeling so fine
In a heart so divine
Which leaves Goosebumps on my spine
And that breath-taking smile
Is worth more than a mile
While your dark brown hair
Dances in the blowing air
That heart break killed me
Leaving me scattered
My soul ripped out
I’m sad
If only you could see [comments] => 1 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 32 [informant] => alibof10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Special Someone

Contributed by alibof10 on Thursday, 28th February 2008 @ 03:03:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Looking into your beautiful brown eyes
Sparkled, feeling so fine
In a heart so divine
Which leaves Goosebumps on my spine
And that breath-taking smile
Is worth more than a mile
While your dark brown hair
Dances in the blowing air
That heart break killed me
Leaving me scattered
My soul ripped out
I’m sad
If only you could see

Copyright Â© alibof10 ... [ 2008-02-28 15:03:00]
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Re: Special Someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th February 2008 @ 09:19:40 AM AEST
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Bravo. For your very first poem I think this is brillant and written beautifully and effortlessly. The ryhming was great. I liked this poem you have the beautiful significance of having someone you have feelings for and then turn it into a tragic ending with your sadness. Well done.

Take care
Christina

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