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Array ( [sid] => 140590 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => And So I Pray [time] => 2008-02-24 23:56:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Come a little closer, God
I'm down on bended knee
Surround me with your light
And listen to my plea

I speak to You at quiet times
I beg of You when I'm low
At times I feel abandoned
And that's a painful blow

Let me ask a question, Lord
What is it I have done?
Why do I feel forsaken
As I suffer with my son?

Haven't I been righteous, God?
Haven't I been true?
This is all within Your plan
Yet I know not what to do

Of all that I will ask You, Lord
Please listen as I pray
Guide the doctors hearts and hands
Let him see another day [comments] => 2 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Tanna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

And So I Pray

Contributed by Tanna on Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 11:56:47 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Come a little closer, God
I'm down on bended knee
Surround me with your light
And listen to my plea

I speak to You at quiet times
I beg of You when I'm low
At times I feel abandoned
And that's a painful blow

Let me ask a question, Lord
What is it I have done?
Why do I feel forsaken
As I suffer with my son?

Haven't I been righteous, God?
Haven't I been true?
This is all within Your plan
Yet I know not what to do

Of all that I will ask You, Lord
Please listen as I pray
Guide the doctors hearts and hands
Let him see another day

Copyright © Tanna ... [ 2008-02-24 23:56:47]
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Re: And So I Pray (User Rating: 1 )
by Sparkster on Monday, 25th February 2008 @ 01:43:58 PM AEST
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I got chills when I read the last line. You sound so sincere. I applaud this work I will keep you in my prayers.

Re: And So I Pray (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 05:56:15 PM AEST
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oh that was very moving. Quiet and like a spoken prayer. Thank you for sharing and may God Bless.

Whisper

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