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Array ( [sid] => 140545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just another free form [time] => 2008-02-22 13:57:07 [hometext] => Just another free form Comment comment comment comment (comment) comment comment that (comment) was subliminal (comment) Feel free to comment [bodytext] => I cant think of anything so i'm free forming,
A dire warning,
For dropping you scholastic capabilities
To sing from trees
And fight the killer bees,
Live as a child all so innocent
I lament
On that comment
Like cementset for rent,
It's too high like a sky high buy with out the buy,
Lets vie
for attention
Retention of invention
Get fat for the mention.
Just writing to be heard
Another word on a word
Absurd that that's what you were expecting
Liikemy writings directing
These ryhmes you're collecting,
Ambivilous true to nature
To agravate your
Anihilator
Didn't see it coming blinded by coersion
Mis directed disppersion
Inter species perversion
To trick the mind entwined suitably from behind
Cascade of masquerade
Sex in the middle as we bade
What was forbade
Who paid,
Did we tip the king fisher
An ounce of shisha
Skoona and blow
Pass the bong Trisha
Sitting there all the time passing
Laughing and gassing,
Bent for a 40 lashing.
Prevention and intervention,
Look at it as a convention,
People so lenient to supposed other races
Walking with other faces from other places,
All supposed removal of racism
And facism plus zenophobia
Get over ya
This is no time for agoraphobia
Times it by eight for arachnophobia
Spinning on this green globia
Talking twisting free form listing
Take it or leave it all choices
People use those voices
Don't march the vote with your actions
You're all fractions unite to be the whole
Drive a steak of power through the wall
I must confess under stress and duress
Time to impress with less
Undress the princess to less
Show them unity unify
Wanna die or simplify
Tearful eye
Don't listen baby don't wail or fear
Daddy's here
Daddy's near
Look looky look how much this took
rate me from pawn through to rook
If you want call me a your master ruler and king
Call me a queen and see the trouble you're in
That's it free formed now i retire
If you like this held interest then lets start a fire
So big it gets notice defies precident
I'll force my prime minister
If you do your president
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 43 [informant] => 5minutepoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Just another free form

Contributed by 5minutepoet on Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 01:57:07 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I cant think of anything so i'm free forming,
A dire warning,
For dropping you scholastic capabilities
To sing from trees
And fight the killer bees,
Live as a child all so innocent
I lament
On that comment
Like cementset for rent,
It's too high like a sky high buy with out the buy,
Lets vie
for attention
Retention of invention
Get fat for the mention.
Just writing to be heard
Another word on a word
Absurd that that's what you were expecting
Liikemy writings directing
These ryhmes you're collecting,
Ambivilous true to nature
To agravate your
Anihilator
Didn't see it coming blinded by coersion
Mis directed disppersion
Inter species perversion
To trick the mind entwined suitably from behind
Cascade of masquerade
Sex in the middle as we bade
What was forbade
Who paid,
Did we tip the king fisher
An ounce of shisha
Skoona and blow
Pass the bong Trisha
Sitting there all the time passing
Laughing and gassing,
Bent for a 40 lashing.
Prevention and intervention,
Look at it as a convention,
People so lenient to supposed other races
Walking with other faces from other places,
All supposed removal of racism
And facism plus zenophobia
Get over ya
This is no time for agoraphobia
Times it by eight for arachnophobia
Spinning on this green globia
Talking twisting free form listing
Take it or leave it all choices
People use those voices
Don't march the vote with your actions
You're all fractions unite to be the whole
Drive a steak of power through the wall
I must confess under stress and duress
Time to impress with less
Undress the princess to less
Show them unity unify
Wanna die or simplify
Tearful eye
Don't listen baby don't wail or fear
Daddy's here
Daddy's near
Look looky look how much this took
rate me from pawn through to rook
If you want call me a your master ruler and king
Call me a queen and see the trouble you're in
That's it free formed now i retire
If you like this held interest then lets start a fire
So big it gets notice defies precident
I'll force my prime minister
If you do your president




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Re: Just another free form (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 01:30:22 PM AEST
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Ok.......so you free flow........but your structure is LONG

Your other writes are good, this one.hmmmm well...LONG and jumbled......Sorry

I do enjoy all your writes, this one was ..um.sarcastic: but hey......it happens


brew~


Re: Just another free form (User Rating: 1 )
by 5MinutePoet on Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 12:05:04 AM AEST
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I know what you mean, it was a late night write. It wasn't meant to have structure it was done more as an organically evolving ryhme scheme than an actual body of representative work.

Looking back I could happily split it into about 3 other pieces and dedicate some time to each one.

But you know my philosophy, whats done is done

Now onto the next one.

Thanks for your feedback




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