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Array ( [sid] => 14050 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Don't You Think It's Funny [time] => 2003-03-10 22:40:00 [hometext] => For Dean... love always, your *starry eyed surprise* :) [bodytext] => All it takes to be happy is you
Instinctively you know when I need you
That's why you come to me when I'm down
I wish you could always be around
I want you eternally as mine
You're what makes the stars in my eyes shine

You'll always be my summer rain
Whatever I need to ease the pain

Darling would you lay me down
Don't you think it's funny how we found
Everything we're living for
In someone who loved somebody else

Baby you're a poet's lover
So don't be ashamed to take cover

The little things are what I'll never forget
The things that will remain between you and me
I love the way you always know how I feel
And the way you somehow give me what I need

I'll always be your sweet surprise
You know the one with the starry eyes

Sometimes out of nowhere I feel my heart fall
I can't deny that it feels purely divine
I just wish you'd think of me a little more
'Cause I need to know everything will be fine

The love we share is more than anyone could know
Even the air we breathe, it makes me crave you more
In my mind I see a memory of a girl
Who held your hand but thought she could never want you
Well just look how far we've come!

Darling would you lay me down
Don't you think it's funny how we found
Everything we're living for
In someone who loved somebody else

I need you to be my summer rain
To ease the pain
And I'll forever be your sweet surprise
With the starry eyes [comments] => 5 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Don't You Think It's Funny

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



All it takes to be happy is you
Instinctively you know when I need you
That's why you come to me when I'm down
I wish you could always be around
I want you eternally as mine
You're what makes the stars in my eyes shine

You'll always be my summer rain
Whatever I need to ease the pain

Darling would you lay me down
Don't you think it's funny how we found
Everything we're living for
In someone who loved somebody else

Baby you're a poet's lover
So don't be ashamed to take cover

The little things are what I'll never forget
The things that will remain between you and me
I love the way you always know how I feel
And the way you somehow give me what I need

I'll always be your sweet surprise
You know the one with the starry eyes

Sometimes out of nowhere I feel my heart fall
I can't deny that it feels purely divine
I just wish you'd think of me a little more
'Cause I need to know everything will be fine

The love we share is more than anyone could know
Even the air we breathe, it makes me crave you more
In my mind I see a memory of a girl
Who held your hand but thought she could never want you
Well just look how far we've come!

Darling would you lay me down
Don't you think it's funny how we found
Everything we're living for
In someone who loved somebody else

I need you to be my summer rain
To ease the pain
And I'll forever be your sweet surprise
With the starry eyes




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Re: Don't You Think It's Funny (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 11:00:26 PM AEST
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Awww.this is so precious, Moonlit.. so very beautiful....
Jenni


Re: Don't You Think It's Funny (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 01:43:24 AM AEST
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    You gotta start writing really crappy poems so I can say something about them. I hate saying the same thing, poem after poem : P.

    Love it, Dee. Sounds beautiful.

    Always,
    Emmerly


    Re: Don't You Think It's Funny (User Rating: 1 )
    by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 10:12:42 AM AEST
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    aww dee it is so lovely, i smiled really big too when i read "Baby you're a poet's lover
    So don't be ashamed to take cover" cute! cute! huggs n love to you, nessa


    Re: Don't You Think It's Funny (User Rating: 1 )
    by LadyDama on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 02:28:16 PM AEST
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    ah, the beauty of love... you capture it well... blessings...


    Re: Don't You Think It's Funny (User Rating: 1 )
    by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 02:52:39 PM AEST
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    Damara,

    Very good write... I love it!

    Reminds me of "Pretty Baby" by Vanessa Carlton!! :)




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