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Array ( [sid] => 140495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep [time] => 2008-02-20 04:00:30 [hometext] => Love sometimes can hurt. Sue x [bodytext] => My frustrated heart it sometimes weeps
For the words I wish I could speak
To tell you how I am truly feeling
How desire for you it sends me reeling

Your kindness it has no measure
My time with you it is a pleasure
Your presence makes me feel brand new
And I know I am in love with you

But we promised to keep it strictly as friends
Just platonic, no twists and romantic trends
A partnership based on honesty and caring
So why is it a sad face I now am wearing

Torn is my heart, by deep routed desire
That tears at my soul like red raging fire
I want to tell you, but am scared if I do
It will be the end of me and you

Love hurts sometimes, and I alone must fight it
For sometimes it remains, unrequited
Is it wrong to be foolish , to love him this way
For I have not found yet the words to say

So desire I hold for him deep in my heart
And tears they fall when we are apart
Love lies bleeding , for want of emotion
And the one I love he has no notion



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Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep

Contributed by jerseysue on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 04:00:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



My frustrated heart it sometimes weeps
For the words I wish I could speak
To tell you how I am truly feeling
How desire for you it sends me reeling

Your kindness it has no measure
My time with you it is a pleasure
Your presence makes me feel brand new
And I know I am in love with you

But we promised to keep it strictly as friends
Just platonic, no twists and romantic trends
A partnership based on honesty and caring
So why is it a sad face I now am wearing

Torn is my heart, by deep routed desire
That tears at my soul like red raging fire
I want to tell you, but am scared if I do
It will be the end of me and you

Love hurts sometimes, and I alone must fight it
For sometimes it remains, unrequited
Is it wrong to be foolish , to love him this way
For I have not found yet the words to say

So desire I hold for him deep in my heart
And tears they fall when we are apart
Love lies bleeding , for want of emotion
And the one I love he has no notion







Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2008-02-20 04:00:30]
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by Compton-tre-block on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 06:04:42 AM AEST
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I LIKES IT WELL DONE...


Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface09 on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 10:01:09 AM AEST
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thanks for the saying what is inside my heart all these while...
i hope time will make you feel better...
great write..thanks for sharing...


Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 01:52:54 PM AEST
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wow, this is heart wrenching but it could never be said, better.
Awesome.
Hangtuff, Sue, as there's always hope.
big ole huggs,
emy


Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 10:16:07 PM AEST
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omigosh sue! That last line has such a sting to it. I defy
anyone to read this and not feel !

very emotive and heart gripping ~

~Breezy



Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:16:33 AM AEST
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Such beautiful emotion. Im sure they will know if not already known.


brew~


Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 08:57:19 AM AEST
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i read this poem and im like ok...and something made me read it again...and im like god! this is beautiful...it has moved me so much...i sometimes wonder how pain can become so creatively emotive!


Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:22:12 AM AEST
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Wonderfully done! So full of emotions. I know the feelings all too well.
Jenni_K




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