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Array ( [sid] => 140490 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever, Fathom [time] => 2008-02-19 23:26:06 [hometext] => Love and Hope fall to fiction, A Conviction of a tattered Heart [bodytext] => I'll Get lost in this love
I'll get lost in those eyes
Stay with me darling always by my side
Rise up with me we'll be just fine
The sun dawns a new day yet this bond remains
Lost in nostalgic memories

Fates threads pull us away
Hate has fueled this cessation of time
For In faith I have found you
With blurred eyes and aching body
Open arms await the martyr

The dimmest dreams cascade over a broken horizon
For the darkest illumination awaits me
As ravenous hands strip me of my beloved one last time
The Silence is broken and daybreak approaches
A Stray tear rolls down my cheek as my love returns to me

Confined in this love
This will never die
You will always be the conviction
The heroine to my heart
The girl in my dreams, The angel in my eyes

Hearts have never looked so good
Than when they're smashed into pieces
Now ameliorate me my love and take back what's yours [comments] => 3 [counter] => 1620 [topic] => 22 [informant] => GraveTypeBed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 60 [ratings] => 12 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Forever, Fathom

Contributed by GraveTypeBed on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 11:26:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'll Get lost in this love
I'll get lost in those eyes
Stay with me darling always by my side
Rise up with me we'll be just fine
The sun dawns a new day yet this bond remains
Lost in nostalgic memories

Fates threads pull us away
Hate has fueled this cessation of time
For In faith I have found you
With blurred eyes and aching body
Open arms await the martyr

The dimmest dreams cascade over a broken horizon
For the darkest illumination awaits me
As ravenous hands strip me of my beloved one last time
The Silence is broken and daybreak approaches
A Stray tear rolls down my cheek as my love returns to me

Confined in this love
This will never die
You will always be the conviction
The heroine to my heart
The girl in my dreams, The angel in my eyes

Hearts have never looked so good
Than when they're smashed into pieces
Now ameliorate me my love and take back what's yours

Copyright © GraveTypeBed ... [ 2008-02-19 23:26:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forever, Fathom (User Rating: 1 )
by GraveTypeBed on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 12:39:58 AM AEST
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I Want to hear anyone and everyones comments!

Re: Forever, Fathom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 02:05:39 AM AEST
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This was brillant. The flow and the words gave this a great kick. I can relate to your feelings about never letting someone go when they meant so much to you.

Hearts have never looked so good
Than when they're smashed into pieces

These were my favorite lines. Well done.

Take care
Christina

Re: Forever, Fathom (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:23:14 AM AEST
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WEll that was one way to tell someone, what they had and lost. Very strong write, with words, that told the truth. WIshed all people would learn to tell others, exactly how they feel......not sugar coat it. Again, very good write.

brew~

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