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Array ( [sid] => 140484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out of touch [time] => 2008-02-19 08:39:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Past sifts through the nights darkness.
Lingering deeply within thoughts lost.
Stuck in webs of emotional ties
heart string pulling through directions cast.

Included in nothing, left out in cold winds, just wanting honesty and to be let in.

Sifting lightly trying to mend the way,
times amiss and things astray.
Many things coming from all directions
like the waves in a storm crashing onto the rocky seascape.

Rain patters the windows and the night is quiet, softness in sounds of wet.

The clock ticks and interrupts the silence,
hour chimes and floors are paced.
Inventing the plan of a souls release
let it drift light with the rain.

Turn it over to someone else, it is what it is that is the way is shall be.
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Out of touch

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:39:50 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Past sifts through the nights darkness.
Lingering deeply within thoughts lost.
Stuck in webs of emotional ties
heart string pulling through directions cast.

Included in nothing, left out in cold winds, just wanting honesty and to be let in.

Sifting lightly trying to mend the way,
times amiss and things astray.
Many things coming from all directions
like the waves in a storm crashing onto the rocky seascape.

Rain patters the windows and the night is quiet, softness in sounds of wet.

The clock ticks and interrupts the silence,
hour chimes and floors are paced.
Inventing the plan of a souls release
let it drift light with the rain.

Turn it over to someone else, it is what it is that is the way is shall be.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-02-19 08:39:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Out of touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:43:29 AM AEST
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Sooo beautiful and emotional write..
Love the read..
God Bless my friend in poetry

Re: Out of touch (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 09:00:41 AM AEST
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A beautiful expression of emotion my friend.

You know I can relate well to this one.

Peace and Hugs from you Hippie friend

~Shannon

Re: Out of touch (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 09:32:17 AM AEST
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Awesome writing as always.
big huggs,
emy

Re: Out of touch (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 05:05:41 PM AEST
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oh this is a classic....

Re: Out of touch (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 11:45:37 PM AEST
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another emotional masterpiece from you shellz. this is so true and wise as always by you.. beautiful work!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Out of touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 11:34:51 PM AEST
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Michelle, damn! You touched me with this one, hun. I have been in
this place and man oh MAN! you described it incredibly well! Yes,
how many times would we trade our happy mindless thoughts
for just a bit of honesty? I would rather be sad in the knowing,
than be blissful and deceived. I love your use of rain here ... it can be
so cleansing, can it not? Beautiful work dear poet. Deeply emotional..

*hugs*

~Breezy

Re: Out of touch (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:51:07 AM AEST
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we can't hold tight to the wind but we can enjoy its breeze....this was beautifully written my friend...

Hugs
Shari

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