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all I need is another blast beat
the ballad for tonight is that look in your eyes
as your forehead sweats and your mouth is spitting lines
scream me another lullaby
one for those that never sleep
tell my story with your strings
fingers rapid
barely seen
my brain pounds in my ears
a unique passion is what I want to hear
the battle for the evening's in the center of the floor
I'm watching
and I'm waiting
and I'm begging for more
scream me another love song
one atleast 4 minutes long
break it down at the end of the night
I love to watch those scene kids fight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 43 [informant] => StephaniePaige [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Showdown

Contributed by StephaniePaige on Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 02:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My heart pounds beneath my feet
all I need is another blast beat
the ballad for tonight is that look in your eyes
as your forehead sweats and your mouth is spitting lines
scream me another lullaby
one for those that never sleep
tell my story with your strings
fingers rapid
barely seen
my brain pounds in my ears
a unique passion is what I want to hear
the battle for the evening's in the center of the floor
I'm watching
and I'm waiting
and I'm begging for more
scream me another love song
one atleast 4 minutes long
break it down at the end of the night
I love to watch those scene kids fight

Copyright © StephaniePaige ... [ 2008-02-17 14:50:12]
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Re: The Showdown (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 03:30:58 PM AEST
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Great writing, my friend.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Showdown (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 05:58:23 PM AEST
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man that reminds me i havent been to a gig in so long... i always feel so awesome after one...

seriously scene kids annoy me i always find it entertaining to watch them fight...

think the best line i ever heard was emo kids, beat them for life..
i heard that at a download festival in england... was so funny as a bunch of emo kids walked by the guy that shouted it and looked soooo scared!

you definitely captured the feeling of a gig! love it!

Re: The Showdown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th February 2008 @ 04:10:13 AM AEST
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wow, Stephanie, I've never witnessed a piece about something I so
DON'T relate to and enjoyed it so immensely! This was really a feat to
be accomplished! You captured emotions that we all experience, though
not by the same inspirations .. bravo, poet. BRAVO!

Glad to see a post from you. Where you been??? Oh yeah ... myspace! :P

You should post more missy!

~Breezy

Re: The Showdown (User Rating: 1 )
by Ratwick on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 07:42:59 AM AEST
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holy *****e dude!!! i LOVE this poem!!! totally got the feeling of a show and reading this has inspired me!! I play in a rock band that just played our first show at a local hall opening for 2 other local bands, and I really want to make a song out of this! We're not a rich or famous band by any means at all, so I can't offer you any compensation
(yet! in a few years, who knows?), but I want to know if youre okay with that. Please lemme know! reply on this site or email me, my email is on my info.
Once again, that is a dope effin set of words you wrote! Who did you go see that inspired you?
Thanks for posting and keep on writing and going to shows!

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