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Array ( [sid] => 140437 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dusk and dawn.. [time] => 2008-02-16 14:41:02 [hometext] => dedicate this to my best friend... :P hahaha.. ;)) [bodytext] => As Night falls and i lose my sight
I cant bear the fact that you are not here tonight
As the shadows close in on me
I now need your light to help me see

As the darkness engulfs me and I feel all alone
I think about the times ive spent with you at home
As dawn breaks, and light pours in from above
I see that you are the one I truly love...

--- Feb 14, 2008 ---- 530 am.. :P [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jnep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => arabic [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

dusk and dawn..

Contributed by jnep on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 02:41:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As Night falls and i lose my sight
I cant bear the fact that you are not here tonight
As the shadows close in on me
I now need your light to help me see

As the darkness engulfs me and I feel all alone
I think about the times ive spent with you at home
As dawn breaks, and light pours in from above
I see that you are the one I truly love...

--- Feb 14, 2008 ---- 530 am.. :P

Copyright © jnep ... [ 2008-02-16 14:41:02]
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Re: dusk and dawn.. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 03:02:26 PM AEST
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Don't know who your friend is but his is good writing.
Huggs,
emy

Re: dusk and dawn.. (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 05:06:20 PM AEST
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Wow i really like this! it runs really smooth and all that good stuff. Best friends get you through the days when the days aren't worth getting through!!

Re: dusk and dawn.. (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 06:28:07 PM AEST
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some times your best friend does turn out to be the one you do truly love, can just take years to realise.

you captured this so well.

Thank you for sharing.

Gen x

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