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till the day you left me all alone.
Now I can hardly make it through;
Come back, babes...All I want is you...

I'm in such pain, can't you see;
You know I love you more than me.
So I'm begging you on my knees;
come back, babes...please...

Your arms were the walls to our home;
But now the boundaries are broken.
i just cannot take this burden;
come back babes...my heart's all broken...

Life seems so cruel without you near me;
I promise to keep you as happy as you want to be...
You made me laugh, cry, love just by your sight;
Come back, babes...I just cannot cry another night...

You know you loved me before;
Can't you give it a try, once more.
I will love you, till I finally pass away;
Come back, babes...atleast for a day...
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Babes was what I called her...

Contributed by madhusudan on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 06:03:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I always thought I could stand on my own;
till the day you left me all alone.
Now I can hardly make it through;
Come back, babes...All I want is you...

I'm in such pain, can't you see;
You know I love you more than me.
So I'm begging you on my knees;
come back, babes...please...

Your arms were the walls to our home;
But now the boundaries are broken.
i just cannot take this burden;
come back babes...my heart's all broken...

Life seems so cruel without you near me;
I promise to keep you as happy as you want to be...
You made me laugh, cry, love just by your sight;
Come back, babes...I just cannot cry another night...

You know you loved me before;
Can't you give it a try, once more.
I will love you, till I finally pass away;
Come back, babes...atleast for a day...

Copyright © madhusudan ... [ 2008-02-16 06:03:24]
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Re: Babes was what I called her... (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface09 on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 02:12:34 PM AEST
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i hope your special one will come back to you soon...take care..

great and very sweet write...

Re: Babes was what I called her... (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 06:45:15 PM AEST
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i can almost imagine the guy i left in england saying this to me. its really horrible for you to realise what you got once it has gone.

i knew how i felt about him but he didnt value what we had, till i moved to america. now he's always telling me how he feels...

thanks for sharing the sad but beautiful poem

Gen x

Re: Babes was what I called her... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 09:29:23 PM AEST
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Not your best work. I liked it. I really did. It's simplicity is endearing but I know you can go beyond this. I've seen it in you before. But if this is your worst (not that I am saying it is) you never have anything to worry about. It's solid, emotive, and unique. Not to mention, so far THE ONLY ACTUAL POEM I have read on here tonight. You are our hope. Seriously a good job. But I do expect more when I see your name.

Good!

-SCM

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