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Array ( [sid] => 140415 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine) [time] => 2008-02-15 11:55:32 [hometext] => This poem sends a message of non-posessive love [bodytext] => Come join with me internally,
so harmonious do we intertwine.
In this, our floral design;
a favorite bouquet of yours and mine.

So we may exist side by side,
and insist we abide where love resides.
My favorite flower is in bloom,
accompanied by your blossom too.

How blessed does our appearance relate,
to a combination of love within our inner state.
In harmony our flowers co-exist.
Together we can enjoy peace and bliss.

The pristine beauty of the rose,
coupled with the vivacious Daisy:
one with its thorns to protect the flower,
the other swaying in the breeze, as if singing in a choir.

The social bouquet of the Daisies:
gorgeous upon the meadow,
a gregarious bunch are we,
often grow wild for everyone to see.

The rose, a symbol of love in my heart,
you and I together until death do us part.
However, no matter how bound together we are
the Daisies represent our separate gregarious social part. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 344 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Willofree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)

Contributed by Willofree on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 11:55:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Come join with me internally,
so harmonious do we intertwine.
In this, our floral design;
a favorite bouquet of yours and mine.

So we may exist side by side,
and insist we abide where love resides.
My favorite flower is in bloom,
accompanied by your blossom too.

How blessed does our appearance relate,
to a combination of love within our inner state.
In harmony our flowers co-exist.
Together we can enjoy peace and bliss.

The pristine beauty of the rose,
coupled with the vivacious Daisy:
one with its thorns to protect the flower,
the other swaying in the breeze, as if singing in a choir.

The social bouquet of the Daisies:
gorgeous upon the meadow,
a gregarious bunch are we,
often grow wild for everyone to see.

The rose, a symbol of love in my heart,
you and I together until death do us part.
However, no matter how bound together we are
the Daisies represent our separate gregarious social part.

Copyright © Willofree ... [ 2008-02-15 11:55:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:22:01 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:22:11 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:22:15 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine) (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:36:43 PM AEST
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This piece was incredibly beautiful and full of imagery that could touch even the most broken of hearts.

How blessed does our appearance relate,
to a combination of love within our inner state.
In harmony our flowers co-exist.
Together we can enjoy peace and bliss.

Oh how I loved this.

Peace

~Shannon

Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine) (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 08:04:31 PM AEST
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The rose, a symbol of love in my heart,
you and I together until death do us part.
However, no matter how bound together we are
the Daisies represent our separate gregarious social part.

made the whole poem to me. it basically sumed up everything that love is to me. i loved the rest of the poem but it was that last stanza

Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Whargies on Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 06:08:59 AM AEST
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Great poem.

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