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Array ( [sid] => 140393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take A Look. [time] => 2008-02-14 05:47:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Here I am
Standing, understanding
That I have lost the battle
That I barely exist
Watch the blood
Run down my wrists
Oops, I may have done something bad
In the midst of a moment
That was oh so sad
Took a dirty knife
And started cutting away
The dead parts of life
Breathe oh my god
Please breathe
Sometimes I forget
And I regret
Playing tricks on my own mind
I decieve, percieve
The dark inside of me
And I continue to bleed
I begged for you
To pray for me
Lay with me
Stay with me
I'm so cold
So cold
My skin goes pale
My hearts about to fail
Lights fade
The blade
It was the blade
That shiny sin
Cut right through my skin
And on my wrist I wrote your name
So I'd know where to begin
I'm a wreck
Wrap your hands around my neck
To hold me up because I'm feeling faint
Look into my eyes
Don't cry
Just watch me die
This is what you wanted
Now it's what you got
I fought
And fought for you
Saw you through
Now look at what you made me do
Here I am
I barely exist
Standing here
Watching the blood run down my wrists. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 298 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Take A Look.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 05:47:30 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Here I am
Standing, understanding
That I have lost the battle
That I barely exist
Watch the blood
Run down my wrists
Oops, I may have done something bad
In the midst of a moment
That was oh so sad
Took a dirty knife
And started cutting away
The dead parts of life
Breathe oh my god
Please breathe
Sometimes I forget
And I regret
Playing tricks on my own mind
I decieve, percieve
The dark inside of me
And I continue to bleed
I begged for you
To pray for me
Lay with me
Stay with me
I'm so cold
So cold
My skin goes pale
My hearts about to fail
Lights fade
The blade
It was the blade
That shiny sin
Cut right through my skin
And on my wrist I wrote your name
So I'd know where to begin
I'm a wreck
Wrap your hands around my neck
To hold me up because I'm feeling faint
Look into my eyes
Don't cry
Just watch me die
This is what you wanted
Now it's what you got
I fought
And fought for you
Saw you through
Now look at what you made me do
Here I am
I barely exist
Standing here
Watching the blood run down my wrists.




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Re: Take A Look. (User Rating: 1 )
by BornReckless on Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 06:29:47 AM AEST
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This poem is sad but masterfully composed.


Re: Take A Look. (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 06:35:55 AM AEST
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A beautifully composed rendition of a selfish act. I am usually not fond of this type of subject mater but from this piece spills a lot of emotion.

Nicely written.

Peace

~Shannon


Re: Take A Look. (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 06:41:44 AM AEST
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stunning...emotionally touching and very sad...the flow helps the poem as it ends well scripted with a sad ending...hold on...


Re: Take A Look. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 01:58:12 PM AEST
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wow a tragically beautiful write as always by you.. this is such a lovely poem

awesome job

vampyress Jenni




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