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That Old Key
Contributed by
honey56
on
Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 05:06:55 AM in AEST
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I found an old skeleton key
So old it was
That old key
While remodeling my wash
Room
It fell right down in my hands
As I stood there watching
I don’t think I quite seen a
Key like that before
In the time of a century
Long, long ago
It was an old key that old
Key
It didn’t fit my lock’s it just
Glitter and shined
Skinny and long with antique
Quality
So, I laid it out in treasure chest
Of it’s own
To let it lay around another century
In time
Beautiful it was and beautiful it is
That old key
That old antique key has finally found
It's own resting place
From the elements of time..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2008-02-13 05:06:55]
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Re: That Old Key
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 01:31:01 PM AEST
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Great write.
Too bad you don't know where it goes.
huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: That Old Key
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by bobbyclay56 on
Saturday, 22nd October 2011 @ 09:59:40 PM AEST
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| Nice but on a scale of one to ten i would give it a four sorry just my opinion. My comments are honest and from the heart. |
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Re: That Old Key
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by shereal_14 on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 06:34:27 PM AEST
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| Hmmm....I can see where you were trying to go with this poem here, but I can also see where it COULD have gone...it was ok, sorry just being honest. I did like it, but I think you could have made it so much more. Keep it up, though because all in all it was pretty good. |
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