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Array ( [sid] => 140323 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2008-02-10 00:02:59 [hometext] => Please read with your heart [bodytext] => Have you ever loved someone so unselfishly?
The kind of love that have altered your reality
You're only used to seeing black and white
But now you see flying colors left and right


You make yourself believe that she does notice
The dreams you weaved for her piece by piece
You make yourself believe that you are her dream
Because that's the only way you want things to seem


Sometimes you ask yourself why you are feeling this way
Your friends give you answer but you dont hear what they say
Some knows better and tells you to forget her
But that's not what you want to hear for an answer


Let me ask you some things you might consider
Before you cut your throat and start to shiver
I know you may not like the things I would say
But tomorrow is too late, you should hear them today


What do you think does she do with all those message?
Does she keep them in her heart or put them in the garbage?
What does she feel when you tell her you miss her?
Does she feel them in her heart or do they even reach her?


Will you ever really have her to hold in your arms...
Will she ever love you the way you love her?
Will she ever see you as the man of her dream?
Will you ever realize that what you have are nightmares?


Are these questions for you? Or questions for me?
Either way these questions will forever haunt me...
For I too feel the way you feel...
And nobody would even shed a tear...


For you my friend are running out of rhymes...
You can no longer hide behind flowery words...
This time you will deal with the pain...
The purest reality of pain...
You are losing this battle...
And you know this is true...
You are going to lose her...
You never really had her...
You just dreamt her...
and that's where she will stay...
In your dreams...
You can cry now...
It's all you can do right now...
For you have lost her even before you met her...
Cry now... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 22 [informant] => my_forbidden_heart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Untitled

Contributed by my_forbidden_heart on Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 12:02:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Have you ever loved someone so unselfishly?
The kind of love that have altered your reality
You're only used to seeing black and white
But now you see flying colors left and right


You make yourself believe that she does notice
The dreams you weaved for her piece by piece
You make yourself believe that you are her dream
Because that's the only way you want things to seem


Sometimes you ask yourself why you are feeling this way
Your friends give you answer but you dont hear what they say
Some knows better and tells you to forget her
But that's not what you want to hear for an answer


Let me ask you some things you might consider
Before you cut your throat and start to shiver
I know you may not like the things I would say
But tomorrow is too late, you should hear them today


What do you think does she do with all those message?
Does she keep them in her heart or put them in the garbage?
What does she feel when you tell her you miss her?
Does she feel them in her heart or do they even reach her?


Will you ever really have her to hold in your arms...
Will she ever love you the way you love her?
Will she ever see you as the man of her dream?
Will you ever realize that what you have are nightmares?


Are these questions for you? Or questions for me?
Either way these questions will forever haunt me...
For I too feel the way you feel...
And nobody would even shed a tear...


For you my friend are running out of rhymes...
You can no longer hide behind flowery words...
This time you will deal with the pain...
The purest reality of pain...
You are losing this battle...
And you know this is true...
You are going to lose her...
You never really had her...
You just dreamt her...
and that's where she will stay...
In your dreams...
You can cry now...
It's all you can do right now...
For you have lost her even before you met her...
Cry now...




Copyright © my_forbidden_heart ... [ 2008-02-10 00:02:59]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface09 on Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 04:29:30 AM AEST
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a very beautiful written piece of work there...i am not sure if i did read with my heart but i am sure u have written from your heart,sincerely to the one you trully love...
i hope someday the tears will dry up and maybe you find someone standing in front of you who will make you smile once again..

take care..


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by forgotten_poet on Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 05:43:05 AM AEST
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this is good
i like the ending

the whole thing is very original


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 07:35:40 PM AEST
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Thank you baby, the write was pure from the heart. I t touched mine deeply




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