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Array ( [sid] => 14029 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => one pill, two pills, three pills, four [time] => 2003-03-10 16:00:00 [hometext] => ah, ode to the meds that, in my case, don't do a thing... ::grin::... i think i should try yoga... [bodytext] => take your meds
the doctor said
they'll clear your thoughts
and fix your head

one pill, two pills,
three pills, four
what the hell
am i doing this for?

my mind still hurts
my heart still weeps
through my soul
my tears do seep

isn't there
a quick fix, doc?
to bandage this crazy
brain i've bought?

one pill, two pills,
three pills, four
what the hell
am i fighting for? [comments] => 8 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 21 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

one pill, two pills, three pills, four

Contributed by LadyDama on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

take your meds
the doctor said
they'll clear your thoughts
and fix your head

one pill, two pills,
three pills, four
what the hell
am i doing this for?

my mind still hurts
my heart still weeps
through my soul
my tears do seep

isn't there
a quick fix, doc?
to bandage this crazy
brain i've bought?

one pill, two pills,
three pills, four
what the hell
am i fighting for?

Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-03-10 16:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 05:52:45 PM AEST
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hmmm, yes..yoga and meditation work for me....but then again, a lot of people think I'm away with the faeries....seriously tho, both are very good practices...
rosie

Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by Damien on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:07:05 PM AEST
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That was very amusing and fun to read- Damien

Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 07:27:14 PM AEST
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Those pills never helped my mom only made things worse! Yoga! Well try it! Dont know!
Let us when you do! Christina

Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 01:18:52 AM AEST
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I know all types of yoga practices I had practised them many years ago and stopped them. for the last 4years I have been walking every day for 50 minutes in the early morning hours and no meds for the last many years.
I enjoy good health only due to my morning walk. venkat

Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:19:19 PM AEST
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i love the transition in this from the not knowing and not wanting it to the peaceful what the heck giving in...least that's what i see here.. hugs & love always nessa

Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by ap on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 02:39:51 AM AEST
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amusing... fun...

hehe...lady dama.. advice...try search for the cause of the ailment b4 tryin find a cure? ur agony will vanish...

luv ap :)

Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:10:40 PM AEST
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hmm, no blood, no sceams, just a craziness in the mind, that'll do

Re: one pill, two pills, three pills, four (User Rating: 1 )
by adsalamon on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 04:25:16 AM AEST
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heh i like this. :)

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