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Array ( [sid] => 140183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Witness [time] => 2008-02-02 04:48:29 [hometext] => Parents teach your children to love [bodytext] => Witness the stone that forms the wall
The wall, that around her heart does stand
Witness the writings on each brick
The writings, each written by only his hand

Witness the child who loved so deep
The Father who could not love at all
Witness the wall around her heart
The Father managed to build so tall

Witness a life of emptiness
Never learning how to give
Witness a life of pointlessness
Never knowing how to live

Witness the loneliness of this woman
As she walks life’s journey alone
Witness her face light up with joy
When in God’s loving arms, she is finally home

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Witness

Contributed by NoSaint on Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 04:48:29 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Witness the stone that forms the wall
The wall, that around her heart does stand
Witness the writings on each brick
The writings, each written by only his hand

Witness the child who loved so deep
The Father who could not love at all
Witness the wall around her heart
The Father managed to build so tall

Witness a life of emptiness
Never learning how to give
Witness a life of pointlessness
Never knowing how to live

Witness the loneliness of this woman
As she walks life’s journey alone
Witness her face light up with joy
When in God’s loving arms, she is finally home

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2008-02-02 04:48:29]
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Re: Witness (User Rating: 1 )
by scroggins on Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 04:53:18 AM AEST
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Very sweet. You are my first read on this site that has pushed the button. You are no longer alone. excellant. scroggins

Re: Witness (User Rating: 1 )
by flight_238 on Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 05:19:10 AM AEST
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:) I like it!

Re: Witness (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 10:11:46 AM AEST
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Excellent write..Really brilliant!!
God Bless!!

Re: Witness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 11:38:05 AM AEST
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beautiful my friend......

Michelle

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