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Array ( [sid] => 140176 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I WATCH THE RAIN [time] => 2008-02-01 17:26:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => in the neighborhood of rain
i watch the soft falling drops
in the distance sounds a train
when it rains harder, it stops
i watch the misty current
travel down the slanted hill
the rain begins to hit me
and increases, but still
i watch the distant puddle
with its many rippled waves
and the wind that moves the tree
which controls how it behaves
i watch the dim lit lamplight
it only flickered twice
although its cold and dark out here
its peaceful...and nice
every few minutes, when i see a car
i can hear its engine running
even when its traveled far
even though im far away
i feel as if im home
the rain is just as peaceful as the oceans waves of foam
i watch and stare quietly
on the balcony up top
and treasure the rain that tumbles down
each and every drop [comments] => 3 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 27 [informant] => beefybeebuzz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

I WATCH THE RAIN

Contributed by beefybeebuzz on Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

in the neighborhood of rain
i watch the soft falling drops
in the distance sounds a train
when it rains harder, it stops
i watch the misty current
travel down the slanted hill
the rain begins to hit me
and increases, but still
i watch the distant puddle
with its many rippled waves
and the wind that moves the tree
which controls how it behaves
i watch the dim lit lamplight
it only flickered twice
although its cold and dark out here
its peaceful...and nice
every few minutes, when i see a car
i can hear its engine running
even when its traveled far
even though im far away
i feel as if im home
the rain is just as peaceful as the oceans waves of foam
i watch and stare quietly
on the balcony up top
and treasure the rain that tumbles down
each and every drop

Copyright © beefybeebuzz ... [ 2008-02-01 17:26:20]
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Re: I WATCH THE RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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Peacefull, calming read.

Re: I WATCH THE RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 02:40:46 AM AEST
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I love the rain, it relaxes me..I like the way it sounds hitting against my window..But "Me I love snow also"..lol
Graet write

Re: I WATCH THE RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 11:03:25 PM AEST
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I loved this write and the way you described the rain is enchanting.

Michelle

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